Reviews for A Study in Donuts
R-dude chapter 6 . 4/3/2014
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Reaper7 chapter 6 . 10/17/2012
Poor Matsuda and his belief in love. A guy shouldn't be concerned about love unless he's POSITIVE he won't be getting any action. So... yeah, the guy's pretty much screwed. Oh well! Can't wait to see more! I love how this is going!
Guest chapter 6 . 9/26/2012
I'm eager ot read next chapter
Guest chapter 6 . 9/3/2012
Im eager to read the future chapters of this history
Guest chapter 6 . 9/1/2012
I like this story
I'm eager to read future chapters
Meany chapter 6 . 7/25/2012
Oh god... That's hilarious! Awesome! Update soon!
X59 chapter 6 . 6/28/2012
hilarious
Chellyisback chapter 6 . 6/2/2012
DUDE! YOU HAVE A FUCKING AWESOME STORY HERE! its just so captivating the way, you describe the characters! and L, OMG L is a jerk! xD oh mam, if maide it a yaoi it would be so much fun! Light as seme, ofcourse! OH, and please kick L's ass 4 me!shuahshau, Light is much more smarter, why dont u make him a detective too? he could have like, two identities! YEP!

STALKER-hugs 4 u!
Rin5o chapter 6 . 5/7/2012
Great chapter! I loved Matsuda' pov))
Ruin Takada chapter 5 . 5/6/2012
D of C,

I'm glad I wasn't the only one who spotted the Buffy reference, with the soul-cursing gypsies and whatnot. Since you write for Buffy as well, I can only assume that's what it was. Well... as long as Naomi doesn't sleep with Light, and no one else does either, we won't be fucked ourselves.

Sayu's great here. I never pictured her as a tearaway, but I'm glad you painted it. The fact that you make it work just makes it even better. Now I'm wondering if she's a walking reference to Ramona Flowers of Scott Pilgrim. I mean, she never had a lead pipe, but still. Close. I can't help but be reminded of Crash Bandicoot either, which only succeeeds to show my age.

Light is just hilarious as he is here. Why few bring themselves to show him in this light, I don't know (forgiving the pun).

Ah well, I love it. I've been reading it out to Ophelia, who is similarly impressed. Helps that I'm a gifted speaker (not).

Thanks, can't wait for the next,

Ruin XXX
plannedbyReaperLight chapter 5 . 5/2/2012
LOL! AWESOME! Love this chapter!

Awkward family dinner was awlward. Poor Sayu, what must she do to get noticed.

Wait Naomi, if Light is Angelus doesn't that mean if you ever show him a "moment of happiness" you'll doom the world?

And is Mello quite certain he's a genius? I mean it seemed painfully obvious how that plan would backfire...
Ashes chapter 4 . 2/4/2012
OH. MY. GOD. That was...ohhh, L, and the heroin addict and family screw-overs, just, guhhh. I lol'd a crazy amount of times! And that Whale-lover swimming away, oh sweet potato chips, the mental images I had by that point, just amazing, ahaha
plannedbyReaperLight chapter 4 . 2/2/2012
LOL!

Really L? The best he can do is to call him a fag on national television? It's like he never graduated high school. Does the L stand for "Loser?" I bet sales of Mello's calendar will skyrocket after that. Free advertising.

Wow, that whole chase scene was hilarious! Thank you!
inactiveaccount100000 chapter 3 . 1/26/2012
Awesomeness. Sayu having blue hair is hilarious, and Naomi thinking Sayu used to be Lights girlfriend was so funny too. I loved Lights visit with L. hahahaha. oh gosh. Light is INsane. very crazy, bloody, scary. rar yikes. uh huh. hope another chapter comes soon. hahaha
inactiveaccount100000 chapter 2 . 1/26/2012
um... SPECIAL POEM! :-D oh darn. chapter 3 is already up. T_T

very interesting fic by the way. War! yay. hahaha
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