Reviews for Indiscretions
DeltaMLP chapter 1 . 4/30
Nice and cute snippet, also very well written.

It's somewhat rare to have Akane be abusive towards Ranma but still sympathetic like how her character theoretically should be portrayed. It's hard to write her stereotypical anime actions without having her be shown as a completely immature and abusive bitch. The other sections were also very good and in character, but that was what stuck out to me the most.
Bean chapter 1 . 1/23
This is really good. And not just because of the nsfw stuff. You had ranma going around making sure they were accepted before choosing who to be with. You get an internet hug.
True Radical Dreamer chapter 1 . 6/14/2015
How did I miss this for four years? Instantly one of my favorite Ranma fics.
Daniel T. Stack chapter 1 . 7/7/2014
I know you wanted to keep this a one shot and yes I did read it back on Christmas Eve. And the next Christmas as well. Not so sure about last christmas... Are you still so certain you won't even address the fallout when Akane realizes what that comment on kissing really meant. The family reactions. There is potential both citrus and character development going off from this point.

Just asking if you would reconsider it.

Spokavriel yahoo. com
Minion chapter 1 . 3/10/2014
I love this couple.
Lazurman chapter 1 . 3/8/2014
Yes. Just, yes. Shampoo should totally have won the war for Ranma.
Shinzochi chapter 1 . 6/26/2013
i loved this and honestly it seemed to me that this is the more likely outcome of the three for the exact reason you pointed out
Inukenmaster chapter 1 . 12/23/2012
Holy tapdancing zombie Santa Claus that was good. It was hot, it was an introspective look at the fiancee wars without going all wangsty or Evangelion style 2DEEP4U, and the only thing I can think of that wasn't 100% canon-compatible was how Ranma had to deal with getting turned on as a girl; and Takahashi-san very intentionally avoided that. It's appropriate I found this the Christmas after you wrote it, just when I needed a happy Ranma/Shampoo story the most. I'd write a longer review but I have a cold and my brain is full of fuzz and mucus.
Digitize27 chapter 1 . 10/30/2012
love it. Took a simple concept for Ranma to finally decide, made it your own, threw in a bit of sexiness and created a great one shot. Kudos.
Wrin chapter 1 . 9/8/2012
OMFG that was HOT! You've got the perfect balance too. Not-quite-smutty but also very dirty. Wonderful!
Materia-Blade chapter 1 . 8/7/2012
Blink blink... blink blink blink...

WHY HAVE I NEVER READ THIS?

Irritacion...
Lazruth chapter 1 . 4/30/2012
WELP. That's clinched it. This is now my favorite straight up Ranma 1/2 fic, period. Really would like to see this continue, are you planning on doing so?
Ashleythetiger chapter 1 . 4/27/2012
nice idea

so Xian Pu/Shampoo wins... looks like when Ranma wants something... whoa...

i can see a slight Ukyo pairing here

Ranma picks Ukyo due to her honesty...

shes pretty much straight with Ranma... heart on sleeve

Akane.. well nuff said

Shampoo not allways honest half time its tricks

Ukyo not like girls... well even Ranma needs rest...

apply water Ukyo desire off... rest for Ranma...

well i liked the story anyway but i did imagine an Ukyo path from this...
Ranmaleopard chapter 1 . 4/16/2012
this is really awesome and interesting i cant wait to see what happens next please continue!
rndomreader46 chapter 1 . 2/4/2012
Du Shu LOL. Very clever sir.
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