Reviews for Indiscretions |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Davvero una bella FIC, complimenti ! Dramma, commedia e limoni... perfetto :-))) |
![]() ![]() God dammit, I really liked it, still continue to hope for a continuation even if it's just a part 2 of the one shot. Always felt that with the curse making ranma both Male and female, realistically Shampoo or Ukyo would the logical choice for an actual working relationship with Ranma, but I have to admit to liking more the pairing with Shampoo. Anyway, really great work, always a fan of what you write ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() BWAHAHAHAHAAHA! I've seen a lot of romances between Ranma and the girls, but I think this one could easily be one of the most accurate depictions of the differences between each of the girls. And I TOTALLY approve of it! Man, I wish you could've turned this into an actual story or series! It would've been AMAZING! Alas, this was a splendid story and I GREATLY enjoyed it! The only downside being that it's only one chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Shampoo does seem the most likely to accept a gender fluid Ranma, all in all a good fic. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice and cute snippet, also very well written. It's somewhat rare to have Akane be abusive towards Ranma but still sympathetic like how her character theoretically should be portrayed. It's hard to write her stereotypical anime actions without having her be shown as a completely immature and abusive bitch. The other sections were also very good and in character, but that was what stuck out to me the most. |
![]() ![]() This is really good. And not just because of the nsfw stuff. You had ranma going around making sure they were accepted before choosing who to be with. You get an internet hug. |
![]() ![]() ![]() How did I miss this for four years? Instantly one of my favorite Ranma fics. |
![]() ![]() I know you wanted to keep this a one shot and yes I did read it back on Christmas Eve. And the next Christmas as well. Not so sure about last christmas... Are you still so certain you won't even address the fallout when Akane realizes what that comment on kissing really meant. The family reactions. There is potential both citrus and character development going off from this point. Just asking if you would reconsider it. Spokavriel yahoo. com |
![]() ![]() I love this couple. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yes. Just, yes. Shampoo should totally have won the war for Ranma. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i loved this and honestly it seemed to me that this is the more likely outcome of the three for the exact reason you pointed out |
![]() ![]() Holy tapdancing zombie Santa Claus that was good. It was hot, it was an introspective look at the fiancee wars without going all wangsty or Evangelion style 2DEEP4U, and the only thing I can think of that wasn't 100% canon-compatible was how Ranma had to deal with getting turned on as a girl; and Takahashi-san very intentionally avoided that. It's appropriate I found this the Christmas after you wrote it, just when I needed a happy Ranma/Shampoo story the most. I'd write a longer review but I have a cold and my brain is full of fuzz and mucus. |
![]() ![]() ![]() love it. Took a simple concept for Ranma to finally decide, made it your own, threw in a bit of sexiness and created a great one shot. Kudos. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMFG that was HOT! You've got the perfect balance too. Not-quite-smutty but also very dirty. Wonderful! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Blink blink... blink blink blink... WHY HAVE I NEVER READ THIS? Irritacion... |