|Reviews for Falling|
| Misgiving Writer chapter 1 . 3/19/2012
Another beautiful yet depressing story. Why am I not surprised? After all, that appears to be one of your specialties. . I'm giving you a compliment there, by the way. That's my favorite type of story.
The entire premise behind this story was just - wonderful? Horrible? Unique? Unique. Let's go with that one. The idea of a well respected warrior raping his apprentices, and just never being caught for it. It's really rather sickening.
The way you developed each character was brilliant, too. The Medicine Cat, Cloudstrike, Flight, Talon - they all had nice little bits of personalities.
It was just a really, really nice story. _
Fadedstar, leader of the Warriors Challenge Forum
| supernovas chapter 1 . 12/25/2011
Thank you so much, Shimmer!
Sorry it took me so long to review, I had a lot of stuff to do today and we have company over at the moment. I loved the story and Flight seemed really cool. I really liked the name Cloudstrike, may I use it sometime? Again, thank you so much!