Reviews for Sweet and bitter chocolate USUK short stories
Guest chapter 30 . 2/21
Wait no that can't be it Q-Q happy ending? Where did you go happy ending? Come back happy ending please! I haven't felt these many emotions in a long time...
Stolavita chapter 40 . 12/11/2015
I have such a great time! You are a genius! It was PERFECT! Best one-shots I've seen in a while by now! 3 Love you!
alguien22792 chapter 39 . 10/20/2014
Ahh damn :(
alguien22792 chapter 36 . 10/20/2014
Awww I love the ending!
aliceinanime chapter 30 . 3/31/2014
You have no idea how much I cry every time I read this part. I have read it countless times and know what is going to happen every time, yet I can't keep the tears from falling. It is so tragically beautiful. The letter he writes is so heartfelt and touching that I just can't control myself. The fact that we know that Arthur is going to disappear for Alfred, for his love, just makes it so admirable. I love this story so much. It brings out so many emotions. I will always remember this story in the fic, because this was the first fan fiction I ever read. I had no other angsty story to compare this to. It will always remain in my top 2 stories because of how much of an affect it had on me. (sorry for the long review, but you just don't understand how many feels i get from this story) I really enjoy reading the whole fan fiction! :)
Ripper26 chapter 32 . 3/28/2014
Did I mention that you have a talent for making me cry? This is absolutely heart-wrenching but I love it anyway.

'Worried by weak England sounded' I'm pretty sure that there should be a 'how' between by and weak.
Ripper26 chapter 31 . 3/28/2014
The second one was quite intriguing. Please tell me you're going to continue it. It sounds amazing.
Ripper26 chapter 30 . 3/28/2014
Crap. The entire thing got blurry halfway through the letter. This is a real tearjerker. Words can't even express this piece of art.
Ripper26 chapter 29 . 3/24/2014
In the part where it said 'Alfred came to the conclusion that neither of them in the clip were good cameraman', shouldn't 'cameraman' be 'cameramen' since the sentence is referring to two people? Of course, I could be wrong...

Anyway, this is very heartwarming and touching. I could only imagine Alfred's flabbergasted appearance when he saw the clip. It is just so cute!
Ripper26 chapter 28 . 3/24/2014
Wow... depressing... but still amazing. I feel like a knife is being stabbed through my heart with this. It really gets deep and digs into your mind and emotions. Absolutely fantastic
Ripper26 chapter 27 . 3/24/2014
So... there's a Devil!Alfred and a Human!Alfred? Anyway this is just so... how do I put this... thrilling. I actually feel pity for Arthur, going through something like the time he Alfred died the first time must be excruciatingly painful...

Is it just me or does Devil!Alfred like Arthur?
Ripper26 chapter 26 . 3/24/2014
I'm ecstatic that there's a sequel! I really liked We'll Meet Again and this fic just brings me to the brink of literally jumping out of joy. I can't wait to see what will happen next! Alfred won't die (again) will he?
Ripper26 chapter 25 . 3/24/2014
This is just so... sweet... and cute... to me that is. Arthur's devotion is just so... heartwarming... and touching... and just plain sweet. I find very cute that Alfred still somehow 'remembers' Arthur even though his memories of him are supposed to be erased. I really loved it! _
Ripper26 chapter 24 . 2/16/2014
Okay so... the angles threw angel!America down into hell when he was just a baby. Arthur and Francis saw him and argued. In the end, Arthur won the argument and kept America. Russia and Belarus in the end... you lost me.
Ripper26 chapter 23 . 2/16/2014
Aww, this is so cute Especially the mistletoe at the end! Thoug it sure as hell isn't Crhistmas here, you made me want to celebrate it months before it's even being thought about being celebrated!

Though in the beginning when you said 'it was Christmas day and the weather bone chilling cold' I think you should add a 'was' between 'weather' and 'bone' you know, to separate the noun from the adjective. Also I think adding a hyphen (-) between bone and chilling would make it a lot easier to understand as well
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