ZOMG, i loved this chapter! :) The Prewett Bros. were in it! (kind of) :) My favourite undeveloped characters. ;) Haha. :)

Plz update soon! :)

Lots of love

sHiV

Just wanted to let you know that I absolutely adore the friendship of James and Sirius. It isn't well developed in a lot of fanficiton and I think this is absolutely brilliant work. Can't wait to see more, and obviously waiting patiently for Lily to realise that she can't deny being without James any longer. (but I'm in complete agreement that if she just got with him right away it would be rubbish.) So yeah, great work keep it up! (:

ABSOLUTELY love this story! it's AWESOME so far! Please update soon! It's SOOOO good! :D

Lots of love

sHiV

This chapter was really good, I like hero James and Sirius :)

And Lily should open her eyes haha.

Great chapter, please update soon :)

This story is great, I really enjoy reading it! Yeah you can probably tell since I just read all 17 chapters!

And yes, to reply to what you said earlier - I think you are one of the few male authors to write a Lily/James fanfic, but I like your story a lot! It is realistic and not overly sappy, I don't like those ones.

Keep updatingg :)

Finally! Yay new chapter :) it didn't have much, but I still liked it

I hope Mr. Fortescue's okay. I'm sure that there's more to that attack. And I can't even begin imagine what Dumbledore will say to them about their heroics. I can't wait to find out though, so update soon!

another great chapter cant wait to see what happens with Dumbledore!:D

Wonderful! This is absolutely wonderful! Update soon!

You included the motorcycle police part! I loved it when we got that snippet from her. Just goes to show that you've thought this out, most people don't bother to include that when they're writing a story like this.

That was a really great chapter. I love how you portray Sirius, he's so witty. But I also like that you put in more Death Eater stuff. Good mix of fluff and non-fluff. x

I don't know how I hadn't read this story before. How could I have missed something so great? So amazing? So incredibly undeniably awesome?

I love the story. Absolutely everything. How conflicted Lily is, how hard James is trying, how Alice tries to help, the whole situation with Max, how Sirius doesn't help the right way. Just... Everything. It's a really great story so far, I'm anticipating the next update.

This is the first fanfic I've ever read that's written by a guy, let alone a James and Lily story! But I love it, your plot line is great, the characters are great, and I love the foreshadowing you put into it :)

I have no criticisms and I loveeeeeeeee this story, please update soon! :]

Sorry it's taken me 15 chapters to leave a review, but I really like your story! I think you're probably right about how sixth year became complicated between Lily and James. And finally! Someone who remembered that Lily never acually hated him. I really like the way you characterize them with conversation as well as internal dialogue and their actions. I know it's easy to just try to tell the reader what they're like - but you do a really good job of revealing them through the story, not the narration.

Hope that made sense. Basically, keep up the good work! Can't wait to see the next chapter.

great chapter what max said at the end very inspirational:D