|Reviews for My Little Sister's Christmas can't be this great!|
| Pea Brain Writer chapter 1 . 10/30/2012
At the end I somehow expecting Ayase to suddenly appear out of nowhere and began the game of predator (with Kyousuke being the preyed, of course). Maybe I read too much cliche.
| archangel77 chapter 1 . 10/16/2012
I was never really a person to like broXsis things...anime, manga, or stories...but after watching the anime and reading this story..dayum dude. The way you wrote it, was...amazing to say the least. I do hope you write another because i loved reading it
| CsillaDream chapter 1 . 9/24/2012
| ky chapter 1 . 9/14/2012
So sweet :'(
| silverstreak93242 chapter 1 . 7/21/2012
well, here's hoping this finds you well today, and I rather enjoyed reading this story! I would hope you would make it more than a simple one-shot, because you have actually started a story that can go many many ways, as the two of them develop their relationship, and get into various situations...but as a one-shot it's very good, and still stands on it's own, but again, I think that you could go a lot farther as to developing the relationship between the two! Very very good story tho!
| KatzeNoel chapter 1 . 5/16/2012
awww this made me cry...
| pinoygm808 chapter 1 . 2/28/2012
It scares me a bit to enjoy this story.. *shivers. lol anyway, this definitely was a interesting and great read. Keep it up!
| Vincent Noir chapter 1 . 1/20/2012
the best xmas fluff fict of this franchise. cant stop rereading it despite the holidays are already over.
| Eliya Shirwood chapter 1 . 1/17/2012
Finally got the appropriate amount of time to thoroughly read this. Overall, very enjoyable (which was exactly what I needed). The flow is smooth, the detail is simplistically thorough, and the interaction is believable. To be truthful, I only have two complaints: Ayase's reaction and the confession (albeit minor).
A simple message to Kyousuke did not seem to distinctly express her concern for their assumed date, since we would expect more diliberate means to ensure her friend's safety from a pervy brother. Granted it's not important to the story and your approach is acceptable just to wrap up her involvement, I just wanted to convey such for future reference.
Lastly for the latter concern, I felt the confession was too sporadic: too cliche coming from the shoujo approach. If that was your intent, you did well. Of course it is understandable to convey such thoughts/feelings during the heat of the moment, but I just don't find it satisfactory (too soon, better said) to bluntly confess when you've gone through all the trouble to express their building nervousness (which is definitely your best feature in this entry).
Like I mentioned earlier, this was very enjoyable; probably one of the better holiday-based one shots that I've read. I'll look forward to more of your tales during my rare breaks.
| anony mouse chapter 1 . 1/14/2012
despite a few grammar mistakes, you had write an excellent fluff that made me wanting more
| TaIoRaFoReVeR523 chapter 1 . 1/10/2012
Kyousuke Kirino all the way! Thanks so much for writing this. You made my day. I seriously love it! This almost as good as the light novel itself. Keep it up.
| snoxx chapter 1 . 12/30/2011
| Izanagi00 chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
I loved this fic. Man you should totally do more KyousukexKirino fics. Thanks.
| 4gb chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
| ginsan chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
Wow what an awesome story, thanks a lot! I loved how Kyousuke was more considerate and Kirino's POV. I really hope you write more fics of this pairing.