|Reviews for Until Serendipity…|
| caca27 chapter 1 . 2/1/2013
how can you make such a wonderful story? but anyway, i really love it. really really love it
| MarMarBinks chapter 1 . 3/4/2012
This is amazing! It completely blew my mind. The way you tied them all together is just...marvelous. I love this! :D
| kikyotwosoul chapter 1 . 1/21/2012
How old naru at. The end of the fanfictionqm
| violetkisses chapter 1 . 12/30/2011
Really beautiful story :)) Serendipity.
| RainbowRagDoll chapter 1 . 12/28/2011
That was beautiful! You had me literally clutching at my heart!
| skyglazingMaro chapter 1 . 12/25/2011
| thelonelyotakugirl chapter 1 . 12/25/2011
Oh my gawd... Beautiful, beautiful story. You deserve praises. hahaha...
It was so frustrating that Sasuke and Naruto never recognized each other. hahaha... Can that actually happen?
This story is just beautiful, amazing... Ack, just so amazing. hahaha...
Well, Merry Christmas. And thank you for making this story. :)
| Starcloudy94 chapter 1 . 12/25/2011
yes a nice xmas persent yay
| bridmatt chapter 1 . 12/25/2011
This was so lovely. Thank you for writing this for us. I think my favorite part of the story was the very ending. Every time they missed each other, I felt frustrated, like why couldn't THIS be the encounter that finally brings them together? But then the final quote tied everything together absolutely *perfectly*!
If you think about the circumstances of their lives working to bring them together and make them into people who completely fit each other, then you can reread each of their earlier encounters and see why the timing was off each time. In the beginning, Naruto was getting over a really bad breakup and only wanted a rebound, not to mention, Sasuke was moving out of the country. Later on, Sasuke wasn't interested in children and in being a father. By the time they meet again at the very end, it seems like they've both mellowed out considerably. Naruto isn't so hung up on love, and Sasuke isn't so cold. The Naruto and Sasuke of the present have a far, far greater chance of making each other happy than the Naruto and Sasuke of their past encounters.
Even though their final meeting is pretty similar to their first meeting, you can see how much they've both changed by how different their attitudes are. I really, really liked how you brought them full-circle like that. _
(BTW, It would have been too cheesy if you'd had them remember the original incident with the umbrella, but I'm really curious to know if you think they ever would. Having a stranger return your umbrella to you after a year is a pretty memorable thing!)
I hope things improve in Egypt and your life becomes less stressful. Happy holidays!
| ShEiLdEd-WiNgS chapter 1 . 12/25/2011
yknow..if you calculate all those years starting from age 22 they'd be 62 the last time they meet. which is weird cuz i cant really imagine naruto and sasuke as grandparents...
| Yume ka Mage chapter 1 . 12/25/2011
Thanks for the gift :)
I really liked this fic. Sad enough but with hope in the end.
The quote sentences you used match with the differents parts.
what's great, it's the meaning of the all fic. No need to rush things or to have regrets, all you do tend to send you where you have to be...
Maybe the feeling is a bit melancholic but the ending part is sweet.
I don't see any violence or sexy stuff, a T rating should be enough.
Sorry if my review is not as clear as I wish but I'm not fluent... So just remember I had a good time reading your story. Thank you for sharing.