Reviews for The Ninja With the Mouth
Jake Liberty chapter 1 . 3/1/2014
Great job! I hope you write more, because you nail everything...even the breaking of the fourth wall!
Maniak chapter 1 . 8/24/2013
Man, that thing sucks. You write worse than Rob Liefeld
Yoko-Kiryuu Bikutoria Kurama chapter 1 . 9/5/2012
O.o Cool!
death5367 chapter 1 . 6/19/2012
I am looking forward to when this updates. The challenge is one of the few that caught my attention.
Captain Omnitron chapter 1 . 12/25/2011
Excellent! I do have a few things to say though.

1. I really like how you're starting out with this, it makes me want to see more!

2. I hope you go into more detail on how exactly Kiba got his claws. I know you already established that Orochimaru did it, but I'd like to see a little more on that.

3. I also would like to see how Naruto got his pistols.

Anyway this is a good start!