Reviews for A Real Christmas
Mahler Avatar chapter 5 . 3/22/2012
The Greatest Story Ever Told, KP-style. And with an ending any believer reading this has always hoped for. My other favorite moments were Ron meeting Rabbi Barkin (Ron just can't escape him, no matter what century), and Joseph saying 'Booyah' to Mary. A touching story about the true meaning of Christmas. Bravo.

MA
Avenging Raven chapter 5 . 3/14/2012
I really love the final chapter and the way you tied everything together. It could not have had a better ending and yes I detected where you plan to go but will save all that for later. It truly was a great and wonderous ending kaitlyn! v
CajunBear73 chapter 5 . 3/14/2012
Nice finish to this one.

CB73
Avenging Raven chapter 4 . 3/11/2012
I think Ron sees Kim in a whole new light and he is prepearing himself to honor her with a great gift but this gift is not one you can see or touch but you can share the gift with another. As to what happened to Kim and Ron they are hopefully on their way home. Now as to question 3: 22 5 and I am not going to explain that further right now if you must know I will lend you the book...v
Avenging Raven chapter 3 . 3/11/2012
Sorry I have not reviewed your story in a while. I usually do beter on such things. Now KP took these events all pretty well considering how outspoken Kim can be. Of course she always did quickly asses situations. I have a inkling on the purpose of the golden horn but this is not the place for science or physics but faith and that is what is being tested is their willingness to believe! v
thebrightside1377 chapter 4 . 2/11/2012
Loved this chapter! I loved the way you described the wonder and awe of it all. Keep up the good work! :)
CajunBear73 chapter 4 . 2/10/2012
A couple of 'Christmas presents' given out that day, huh?

Realizations of an event so long ago, and what it meant/means, too.

But even Ron can't avoid the Family Barkin, can he...? No matter where or when. LOL!

CB73
CajunBear73 chapter 3 . 1/11/2012
I think there's going to be a lot of metaphorical ground to cover by the time Kim and Ron make their destination.

Awkward for Ron, but Kim will stand by him, just as he did for her... Cultural, religious differences and all that.

Now to see what happens when that horn blows.

CB73
thebrightside1377 chapter 3 . 1/11/2012
Great up-date! I especially love how Ron is finding out about the mericle of Jesus Christ! Sometimes it is hard to understand that He loves us so much that He died so we could have eternal life! :) Keep up the great work!
Avenging Raven chapter 2 . 1/8/2012
They created a portal to Bethlehem, wound up in a desert just in time for the appearence of the star to led them to where the son of god was born. I am so envious of them. If I could recreate the portal I would try to show up when Jesus was a young man so I could hear his teachings first hand and witness some of the miracles he performed. The feeding of the multitude with just two loaves of bread and fish was always my favorite, not to mention the healing of lazarus and several others that had died would have been honored to withness those as well...I know wishful thinking on my part-Katelyn. But to learn from the master it would have been worth it! Now back to the story I am so amazed you put this together in such a short time and I am sooo enjoying it immensely and cannot wait to read Chapter 3 please continue asap. A cornucopia of kudos to you Katelyn for this one...v
sincerly.m.l chapter 1 . 1/2/2012
-.-' welp I feel left behind...but anyhoo better late than never right? Omfg my mom did tge same thing with the smaller box in a bigger box thing...it took me like fove mins but i got my iPod & Hello kitty cova so it was worth it. Awwz cute they woulda been each others first thats sweet...i need to catch up on the other stories though (: welp anyway fantastic job doll! Loved it! Oh and MERRY LATE ChRISTMAS
LuvPurple99 chapter 2 . 12/29/2011
Nice start to the story! Ok theories: Bethlehem, star that led wisemen to Jesus. Haha but those are just guesses ;) keep up the great work!

-LP99
thebrightside1377 chapter 2 . 12/29/2011
Most ingenious thing EVER: Ronline ... Love it! So much better than 'Ronunicator' ... :) Can I use it sometime?
CajunBear73 chapter 2 . 12/29/2011
This ought to be a long distance call for the Ages.

Rock of Ages, that is...

CB73
CajunBear73 chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
They were that close... But now maybe they can take out their pent up emotions out on Dementor.

CB73
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