Reviews for Green eyes met green
Guest chapter 1 . 1/27
This was fantastic. You did a great job on the writing style
Magiclulajane chapter 1 . 1/3
Really cool original layout. Gave me similar emotions to the ones I felt writing "the brother", beautifully done.
Guest chapter 1 . 8/20/2014
You could have told someone that this was poetry, not an actual story.
Superhypercarrot chapter 1 . 2/20/2014
I love this, the layout is fantastic, its brilliant!
123123123123123123123123 chapter 1 . 8/14/2013
OoOoh, interesting!
Guest chapter 1 . 8/2/2013
I love this!
I love the effect of the format
Shantul Khan chapter 1 . 8/13/2012
Beauiful. I love how you have portrayed all harry's emotion.
Slytherin Studios chapter 1 . 5/5/2012
Awesome job, I loved it!
Just Another Aceves chapter 1 . 4/14/2012
So I usually don't like poems but I absolutely love this one:)

I also think it would make a great story:)
black rose chapter 1 . 4/9/2012
omg this was great 2 you really should make a story out of this incase you have already and i havent read it on your profile ill read the others yh ill review it always cyaaa (: :)
inactiveacount121212 chapter 1 . 2/11/2012
Oh My Gosh! Absolutely amazing! Terrific job! :)
kyjori chapter 1 . 2/2/2012
Interesting. I sort of liked it.
MiddleEarthDweller chapter 1 . 1/27/2012
Great Story! I absolutly love the vertical wording. It is a very unique way of writing the story. I would love for this poem to become a book. Wonderful Concept! :)
MrNeedsToRemoveAllFavs chapter 1 . 1/15/2012
This really was well written. And the formatting, while odd, was wonderfully done though I could have done without the one-letter-per-line ones.
kits-hold-their-tears chapter 1 . 1/8/2012
I like it. I have to say it got a little hard to read in some places. Like when you wrote words like t/h/i/s.

Also I would have wrote this in a him POV and a lily POV because I got confused for a second when we entered the two POVs suddenly. I was like, "wait so did she think that this is what he thought? Or was that him?"

Still nice work here. I liked it.
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