|Reviews for Fear of the Dark|
| Samantha chapter 20 . 2/20
This fic has got to be one of the most beautiful stories I've ever read. It even had me crying at one point which is quite a feat! The whole series was perfect actually and I loved the additions to the knights of the round table. Especially Gerrick and Aldwin and Cadmon... and ok all of them ;) I also loved the druids, especially Ragnell, and you've created some pretty awful villains (which is a compliment by the way). So sad it's over and I hope you do decide to write more!
| LinBates chapter 7 . 2/1
I'm greatly enjoying your story! I have just one main complaint and that is sometimes it's difficult to determine who is saying what in your dialogues. Several times I've had to re-read passages to determine who the speaker is. Try re-reading what you have written after having let it sit for a while. I found that it's very easy to get so caught up in what your writing that you read into it something other than what you actually said. Leaving it for a while then coming back to it and re- reading it again will give you a new insight into what you actually said verses what you meant to say. Also watch your use of pronouns, i.e. like 'he, she, him, her.' It can get very confusing as to whom your talking about. It's best to use their name at least once in the sentence to help the reader keep track of whom is talking and whom they are talking about.
Good luck with your story and happy writing until we meet again.
| son-of-a-dragonlord chapter 20 . 1/23
This was great! I just had to give a review after finishing this story because I'm in love! I loved all your OCs (especially the knights - they're the best things ever) and the plot in itself was great. I may or may not have squealed/teared up in delight when Arthur bowed to Merlin and brought him to the feast :D I also may or may not have laughed out loud at the knights (especially Gwaine and Gerrick) throughout the whole story. Very well done!
| Anon chapter 20 . 1/18
Woah this story is fantastic!
| misspink3000 chapter 20 . 1/3
This is one of the best Merlin stories I have ever read! I LOOOOOOOOVED it! I know it would be hard but I would absolutely go CRAZY, DIE and LOVE IT if you could write another SEQUEL to this! Especially if it had even more Merlin whump and a worried Arthur! PLEEEEEEEEASE!
| cindy4651 chapter 20 . 12/21/2013
Truly lovely. Now to read the rest of your stories!
| cindy4651 chapter 18 . 12/21/2013
I like your decision to leave Eadric out of it so they could explain it to him, and also that you spent hardly any time on the recap. I'm not sure why something that took so little reading time should add so much, so you obviously did it very well!
| cindy4651 chapter 17 . 12/21/2013
Loved it, thanks!
| cindy4651 chapter 15 . 12/20/2013
""Help me," Merlin ordered them, and placed a shaky leg forward."
Love it. We hardly ever see Merlin acknowledging his own importance.
| cindy4651 chapter 12 . 12/20/2013
I like this chapter and the reveal and Ragnell. I also appreciate your good grammar, especially since I suspect it isn't natural to you (you use the word "seen" incorrectly in this chapter). You've put a lot of effort into the ideas and the storytelling and the writing. Good job!
| cindy4651 chapter 11 . 12/20/2013
I'm enjoying this. Merlin having a different flavor of magic that these druids don't recognize is interesting. I suspected Arthur was playing possum! :)
| cindy4651 chapter 7 . 12/19/2013
This story is wonderful, as are all the stories in this universe. I hope there isn't much torture, because I skip past that. But the story and the writing are very good.
One note, though... You must have changed tenses or something while writing, because both places you have the word "seen" in this chapter are grammatically incorrect.
| cindy4651 chapter 1 . 12/18/2013
A promising start - I'm looking forward to seeing how it goes! Thank you sooooo much for writing!
However, "But everyone was taking Arthur's queue of silence and had not said anything.". That should be "cue", not "queue".
| shelle-ma-belle chapter 20 . 11/15/2013
I only recently discovered this story and I have to say I loved it so much!
At that part where Gwaine asked what you were supposed to give to a girl who was allergic to flowers, I was just begging Merlin to say strawberries, it would have been an awesome way to bring Freya into it. Did you ever decide whether the whole thing with Freya happened in this universe?
I really really hope you feel inspired to write a sequel someday! :)
| Lillibella chapter 20 . 11/2/2013
Wow! Wow wow wow! This story was so wonderful! I just read this whole series, glued to my computer screen. You are a wonderful writer, thanks so much for these beautiful stories! I can't wait to read more of your work.