Reviews for Blues
Guest chapter 1 . 1/15
Too heavy on the New Orleans references. And almost none of us talk like that.

I do appreciate the idea that magic in America would be especially potent down here in my neck of the south, though.

I'd like more actual thoughts and motives and fewer Louisiana shout-outs. It's especially hard for non-natives to read, which might be your point, but shutting out your audience doesn't do much good.
RumbleRoar811 chapter 1 . 11/5/2012
I miss N'Orleans. Home sweet home. My Home Sweet Home.
amazingtofu chapter 1 . 12/29/2011
I don't think I understood this. It actually reminded me of some stream of consciousness stuff we read in lit last year.

What I think I got is that Tommy is giving the DA what it takes. He was young, they were all young. But it didn't matter. Someone had to do it.
yellow 14 chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
Doesn't make sense. Sorry, but please do better