|Reviews for Disequilibrium|
| ShayL92 chapter 1 . 11/11/2015
You write so good. Poor Marty is exhausted. I don't know if time travel is anything like jet lag but he's been through a lot in three movies and one game. I don't know if the games are canon since it is Telltale's creation but I think someone from the movie was the story consultant for it so maybe it is? I wish there were more stories written that take place during the Back to the Future game. I found a couple but I don't think there are any others. It was a fun game and it was interesting to see what Doc Brown was like as a teenager. I love how everything was accurate and there were a few nods to the movies like the whole cutscene in the first episode with the test-run of the DeLorean, even if it was Marty's dream I enjoyed that reference to the first movie.
I couldn't get over how Marty's voice actor in the game sounded like Michael even though it wasn't Michael so bravo to that guy. I also loved how in your story Emmett mentioned Marty's strange sleeping position. I guess its comfortable but I have never seen anyone sleep like that in my life. It gave me a laugh to see it in the game. I think it was the beginning of episode five. I didn't mean to talk about the game more than the story. I always get excited when I see stories that take place during the game and wish people wrote more of them. I hope Telltale does a Back to the Future game season 2. Anyway I like the idea of Young Emmett/Marty friendship since the movies never mention what Doc was like as a teen. I feel like Marty's experiences with young Emmett probably helped him to understand Doc better if that makes any sense.
| Supershinydiamon chapter 1 . 6/5/2015
This is...kinda cute...
| SketchytheSketchbook chapter 1 . 10/7/2013
Aww! I like this story, I'm going to put it in my favorites.
| snickers-03 chapter 1 . 1/3/2013
This was amazing. And yes, I'd love to read more of young!Emmett/Marty fics. I love their relationship and think it could be explored more. Please write more.
| tempestSylph chapter 1 . 9/21/2012
I'm so happy omg.
| Apprile chapter 1 . 7/25/2012
Excellent ! Good Job, I like it :D
| CherriesAndBananas chapter 1 . 7/24/2012
Young Emmett/Marty is one of my OTPs. :D Amazing job. :D
| Siael chapter 1 . 6/14/2012
aww love it!
| Auzzies chapter 1 . 5/21/2012
Wonderful as always, my friend. I'm glad that there are at least a few Doc/Marty-ish fics out there.
I think that you should continue to do things like this, I just wish that there was some actual romance, though. And maybe some chapter stories. Because there's, like -what?- one Doc/Marty chapter fan fiction out there?
I like that you base these on the game, though. It's an interesting setting.
Anyway, I'm just here to let you know that there is an audience for this pairing, even if it's not the largest in the world. There are new fans created every day, I'm sure.
Until next time...
| Chocothnda chapter 1 . 5/13/2012
This is awesome :D I love how well you've written them, and I would definitely love to see more! There's not enough Emmett/Marty out there in the world
| Binnel chapter 1 . 4/12/2012
Hmmn, I always thought paradoxes were loops of alternate universes...
| good job chapter 1 . 1/14/2012
good job! not much fiction for these two, this was really really good!
| Great work chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
Really good story. I especially liked how you handled Marty's reflections on the similarities and differences between younger and older Emmett...
| Clawshawt chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
Oh my goodness, patience was wonderfully rewarded.
The chemistry between Emmett and Marty is spot on and just, I can't even talk I'm so happy.
The way you organize Emmett's techno babble is phenomenal, I can imagine him saying that dialogue. I would never be able to write that. You have loads of patience when it comes to researching/analyzing the game. D
Poor Marty, I wish there was a way for him to spend more time with dear Emmett. I'm sure we can come up with some sort of excuse, I mean the movie itself certainly has its plotholes and, how do I explain this.. basically the natural course of time is screwed up and can't be fixed but the movie says it can. XD Haha I don't know, sorry if that didn't make sense.
I'm so excited, you write these two flawlessly. I'm anxious for what more you can dish out of your magnificent mind. _
Thank you so much for this!
| CandyGalaxy chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
Great work! You've got a really good grasp of the characters, which I love to see :) It made me feel a little sad at the end though ; n ; Would like to read more like this ~ !