Reviews for Harry Potter: Magical Time
Whisperponyx chapter 30 . 5/14
Oooooh this is a good ending... No I, going to imagine harry emerging like a baby Phoenix being reborn
Toraach chapter 23 . 4/22
That's poor story. Not some cilches, but one big cliche itself.

20 minutes and look into some chapters is enough to see that.

Zero of realism, psychological development and such. Yet another story with overpowered Harry, who one day wakes up and decides to be a badass. Politics is unexisting here, a typical stuff for "lord stories". And in this chatper how Harry is talking to Narcissa. Lol. That's a fine example how unrealistic is it. And that typical, "If Draco is going something to Ginny, I will kill him", a typical stuff for stories without any realistic character development. Example, Draco insults Hermione and calles her a mudblood, he is cursed by Harry and co, sometimes I have even seen that Draco goes to the hospital wings in more extreme cases to Azkaban or killed. And what with Harry? Are other students happy that Harry is a brutal murderer, clearly dangerous to others? And what with that it is overreaction? And of course teachers are happy for that. I remember in one story Harry killed Goyle, cut Draco's arm and injured Crabbe and even didn't get a detention, totally nothing...

Canon!Harry is a pussy, but I prefer that than overpowered "Lord Potter-Black-Blue-Green-Slytherin-Gryffindor-Merlin-Palmbeach".
Guest chapter 30 . 3/27
You really fucked up this story! When I started to read it showed real promise! But then you rushed the last few chapters - which makes me not want to read any other story you write because I imagine you would treat all your stories like you don't care about the end product - only that you want to concentrate on your next story!
Guest chapter 28 . 3/27
Hermione turned 16 shortly after the school year begun!
Guest chapter 27 . 3/27
Merlin had a portkey that would activate when he became unconscious - why did it not activate when Voldemort stupefied him? You are not very consistent!

All hermione has to do is smack Ron every time he talks with food in his mouth! Isn't she supposed to be smart?
Guest chapter 25 . 3/27
I only read finished stories
Guest chapter 19 . 3/27
You went from 10 August to April?
Guest chapter 16 . 3/25
Shampoo for a snake!?
Guest chapter 14 . 3/25
They sat down. Two paragraphs later Ginny led him to the bed and they sat down. AGAIN?!
Guest chapter 12 . 3/25
Minone? What the hell kind of name is that?

Guest chapter 7 . 3/25
Who was the 4th person Harry thought of
guest chapter 30 . 12/26/2016
To be honest the beginning sucked. It was very boring and I think you know this yourself which was the only reason I skipped ahead to the time travel part which I'm very glad I did. The relationship between Harry and Ginny was a bit cringey and attention seeking but after it was introduced it got a lot better. The story certainly does improve which is what you promised. My only complaint now is the open end which I absolutely despise since I see them as an example of lazy writing and an excuse to not fix plot holes but since this is only fanfiction it's a little understandable. For a fanfic this is a pretty good job despite the ups and downs and I did appreciate your humor. There's room for improvement but is still a good read.
Geoff chapter 14 . 11/8/2016
Okay I'm sick of the weak scared harry enough okay it's annoying
setokayba2n chapter 30 . 10/15/2016
Gaaaaahhh! Damn it! sorry but really, a open-ended ending? just in the best part...

Even if I just imagine Harry returning like a phoenix, it's too much...
Jen chapter 30 . 9/7/2016
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