|Reviews for Better Than None|
| Shirogi chapter 16 . 2/7
Omg so sad.. Could you pls make jim comeback like in canon and let him say "did you miss me?" That would be freaking awesome and im sure you would make a lot of ppl happy including me ;)
But loved your story! Omg hopefully you could make jim comeback i would love to see johns reaction to that :D
| Ella-chan000 chapter 16 . 1/31
You killed Jim :( Will you make another ending? For John and Jim? You made me sad
| Ella-chan000 chapter 7 . 1/31
Usually when I read a story posted years ago, I comment on the last chapter. But this is too amazing! I mean John and Jim?! So twisted! How methe development of their relationship is brilliant! It's believable! Good job! Holy shit!
| larimon chapter 16 . 1/31
I am just passing by to say I absolutely love this fanfic and I read and reread it and I never get tired :) awesome fanfiction you got here
| whoah chapter 16 . 1/12
Omg i hate you for killing Jim. This was soo beautifull! Can't stop crying _._
| The-Key-To-Your-Heart chapter 16 . 1/8
Thank you so much for destroying my heart and stamping on it, oh and don't forget throwing it off a building! I haven't cried whilst reading a fanfic in such a long time and oh my god it's 3am and I'm a sniveling mess, god! Why did Jim have to die?! WHY? Oh my god I'm so upset now but this is still one of my favorite fanfics. Even though I'm now dead thank you :') xxx
| TheRYU chapter 16 . 12/26/2013
OMG im crying this is sooo fucking sad im actually crying poor jim and poor john omg im crying this was an amazing story at first i didnt think the two would do well together but o damn you made it work and gave this life im amazed and so fucking sad i dont know what to do. Though it dose't help that i was playing depressing disney music while reading these last three chapters omg the walk and last night thing then the roof god i was in tears then john poor poor john god i have never felt so sad for someone this much i am crying writing this review good fiction great story please dont ever change the way you write you bring passion and such great emotions into what you do never give this up!
| Guest chapter 16 . 12/20/2013
Hey i would just like to say this. Was. Beautiful i started reading this at 2am and well you have me at awe I CRIED SO MUCH YOU HAVE NO IDEA! *gross sobbing* anyway you are amazingly talented and this is my favorite John/Moriarty - i heard there was a sequel so im going to hunt for that, my feelings hurt, thank you for this and keep up the good work!
| black7angel chapter 1 . 11/9/2013
I love this one!
I think I have not cried this hard over a story in a long time!
Just love the writing style, too.
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Now I'm going to read more of your stories!
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| Random Reviewer chapter 16 . 11/7/2013
GODS... this story made me cry, or at least shed a few tears when Moriaty died. And NO other angst fanfic has done that yet. So hats off to Better than None.
- Random Reviewer -
| KnowlingGirl chapter 16 . 10/29/2013
First of , i'd have to say thank you.
You are a beautiful writer, this story was amazing. It also made me cry like a little bitch, so i'll probably need to punch a wall to gain some composure.
This story hurt, a lot. Which is a good thing,really, it proves how much you captured the characters personality and made me feel emphatic toward them, to love them . Like I was in there with them. And as much as i would like to dislike you for making Jim die and causing me to make wailing, inhuman noises no one should ever have to hear retreating into the wardrobe, you are too much of an amazing writer to have made me fall in love with a ship and break my heart in 16 chapters.
So yeah, thanks.
I hope to read more from you.
| Petra Megami Assari chapter 16 . 10/29/2013
I hate you. I mean that in the best possible way, though. Because I wouldn't hate you this much if you hadn't made me love Jim/John so much.
Your story was wonderful and I love it and you're an amazing writer... But I think I'm always going to hate you for breaking my heart so beautifully and horribly.
| Sesshylover4eva chapter 16 . 10/11/2013
Omg it's 12:50 am and I'm crying my eyes out in my bed. Why was this story so wonderfully sad.
| J chapter 16 . 9/18/2013
Hi, i know this review isn't much beacuse you got hundreds of them but i had to tell you this. Your story was very beautiful, well-developed characters and an amazing storyline. I could not stop reading, it felt so real. And I love that you didn't end it in a "they lived happily ever after". It was just perfect. Keep writting more stories, your a really good writter.
So thank you for "better than none" :)
| OnceUponAFedualFairyTale chapter 16 . 9/16/2013
No...damn I'm freakin' blubbering like a little baby. At first I would've never considered Jim as a suitable love interest, I hated him. But you made me love him so much that I was praying that he could be with John though I knew it would be a tragedy.