|Reviews for All At Once|
| corkykellems chapter 3 . 11/19/2013
Speak up Bella...Only You can change this...LOL...Great Chapter
| Guest chapter 11 . 12/10/2012
R u writing more of this or is it done
| Jeniesethebeast chapter 11 . 11/22/2012
Congrats on your new fiction stories? I hope you keep going with this one! I love it!
| Lifemovedforward chapter 11 . 3/29/2012
Sweet, sensual, and a little... sensational. Great update!
| LoriAnnRut chapter 11 . 3/23/2012
A lot happened in that really short chapter.
Jacob called her stupid. I would have been pissed at him. She isn't stupid what she did was stupid, there is a big difference.
| BeckieT108 chapter 11 . 3/22/2012
Another lemon and another sorta cliffhanger. Now we have to deal with Aro. Cant these two catch a break? Love it!
| BeckieT108 chapter 10 . 3/22/2012
Loved it but... I kept thinking 'Please oh powerful author...don't have Jake imprint on someone else. Please!' Im glad they are finally together.
| BeckieT108 chapter 9 . 3/22/2012
Yes! Finally an almost lemon. Very hot!
| BeckieT108 chapter 8 . 3/22/2012
They both are soooo stubborn. I guess if they both gave in to their love for each other you wouldn't have a story. Lol... Little by little they will find their way back to each other.
| BeckieT108 chapter 7 . 3/22/2012
And of course you leave us with a cliff hanger! Friends is a good starting point. Hopefully they won't stay in the friend zone too long.
| BeckieT108 chapter 6 . 3/22/2012
Im glad Bella held her ground and didn't give in to Jacob. She had every right to be angry. I am really enjoying your story!
| Kim-imprinted-on-a-wolf chapter 11 . 3/21/2012
Wow - that was unexpected, but good on Bella for fighting back!
| m.m.press chapter 11 . 3/20/2012
whoa sexy. really sexy ;)
| notashamedtobe chapter 11 . 3/20/2012
Yay Ed's dead and Bella gets Jake loving
| berryblue96 chapter 11 . 3/20/2012
Yay! No more Edward! So happy Jake and Bella are finally together :)