Reviews for Fairytale of LA
Guest chapter 13 . 6/19
why dont you feed them a bunny lover
Vadercat chapter 16 . 6/12
A little choppy in the writing, but I liked the story line and you cleaned most of the loose ends. Did you kill off Kort? What about the other agent? A truly good story is tying up all your loose ends, just because you rescued Callen and Gaveril, doesn't mean you can abandon your readers and go on to the good stuff and forget about the rest. If they were important enough to bring into the story, then they are important enough to finish off their story lines with a reasonably satisfactory end.
Vadercat chapter 1 . 4/21/2018
Love happily ever afters. Great story, lots of action and you tied up all the loose ends.
Petunia3116 chapter 16 . 11/20/2016
Awesome as always! Another Callen ass kicking,and put back together with family beside him!
Dramamama5 chapter 16 . 4/18/2016
Very good. My biggest thing is not seeing Callen turned into a sappy mess...he'll lose the edge that makes him the agent he is...sadly most romance stories are doing that. Sure he's romantic but not to the point of spilling his guts with sappy lovey dove stuff or tearing up on everything so easy. His walls don't tumble that easy...please don't let that awesome work as always
Dramamama5 chapter 10 . 4/17/2016
Awwwwwwwww! Sweet
Dramamama5 chapter 7 . 4/17/2016
Oh my...this is good and getting better...
Dramamama5 chapter 4 . 4/17/2016
Curious...too many chapters to go for it to resolve so quickly...
Dramamama5 chapter 2 . 4/17/2016
Well, holy crap... ok...
Dramamama5 chapter 1 . 4/17/2016
Just found this did not disappoint. Excellent!
Mic RiddyBanon chapter 13 . 10/17/2014
Loving this fic very much, you are a fabulous story teller! I must admit there are a few places you might benefit from a beta reader, it's a shame to lose the flow of such a good fic for the lack of beta. Looking forward to reading the next chapters, well done on this story!
klt1 chapter 16 . 4/27/2014
Oh my god! This storyline is amazing! I haven't read a story line like this before but i loved it! I was hooked!
Please keep writing i am now going to read the sequel!

Love klt1
ananova chapter 16 . 10/14/2013
So glad Callen finally found family. This is the first time I've seen the idea that he's related to the Comescus, it's an interesting one.
Guest chapter 16 . 1/8/2013
carrots for the bunnies. Great story
ilse23 chapter 5 . 10/11/2012
interesting story. just not really my type of story. tried to read it. it's a good story but just not really my thing
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