Reviews for Marked
Tannerdarko chapter 29 . 1/31/2013
Why aren't there more reviews for this story?! It's so awesome!
I bawled. I hope you make Sarah and Draco friends at the end. I love him and felt really bad for having been pushed into being a Death Eater.
Please update soon!
Mrs Yaya chapter 17 . 7/25/2012
This is getting more compicated for her with this trouble with her brain. I wonder if it has something to do with the darkmarkBella gave her?
PSay chapter 11 . 4/29/2012
Ron is deffinitely not the most tactful person in the world. At least Hermione trys to treat Sarah well. I look forward to more interaction from Sarah and her friends. The fact that she felt a death eater at the pub was good and bad. She is afraid of being snatched and taken to Bellatrix but she also sensed some other darkness. Of course that was the necklace that cursed Katie Bell. I'm glad she confronted Malfoy but it was surprising when he confessed in a way that he was forced to join the death eaters. I look forward to more of this story. Thanks for writing. pms
PSay chapter 10 . 4/29/2012
Well Sarah did confront Malfoy with a little bluff and to let him know that she "knew". Actually she does know somethings but not all. I will watch to see if she discovers anymore. Harry had a much harder time with Snape's occluemency lessons than Sarah did. I'm glad that she was able to force him out at one point. I look forward to more of this story. pms
PSay chapter 9 . 3/23/2012
Sarah is really having a bad time. At least it is a little easier with the necklace and her talk with Dumbledore went fairly well. Although Dumbledore really didn't answer her question about the darkness around Harry. The fact that Harry is a horcrux is very bad but Sarah doesn't need that kind of information. Especially when Harry doesn't know himself. I hope she doesn't suffer too much from her occlumency lesson with Snape. I look forward to more of this story. Thanks for writing. pms
Mrs Yaya chapter 9 . 3/22/2012
Thank goodness that neckless is helpong her to cope. I do wish that ahe would tell Harry about the feeling she gets around him. As to helping Malfoy, that will be a challenge.
Mrs Yaya chapter 8 . 3/11/2012
The unbreakable bond was a good thing. It would help keep Sev safe but couldn't her mind be read and then what would happen. It eas very brilliant for Headmaster to give her a feather from Fawks.
PSay chapter 8 . 3/10/2012
Dumbledore is an idiot for sending Harry and Sarah to Snape for occulmency training. He doesn't train he just attacks. I hope Sarah doesn't go back to him again. At least Dumbledore gave her one of Fawkes feathers. That does help but not quite enough when she has to deal with Snape. Thanks for writing. I look forward to more of this story. pms
Mrs Yaya chapter 7 . 2/15/2012
Draco is his own worse enemy. He is not thinking straight due to the mission he has been given by Tom. I really didn't want Sarah to learn of the headmsters secret or that of Snapes. It is very dangerous because of nuttsy Bella. I hope she is a guick study in Occumency.
Mrs Yaya chapter 6 . 2/9/2012
Now that Draco has taken the mark Sarah will have two to deal with. Bella is trying to get in but thankgoodness she is being blocked out. I wonder how long she will be ale to stop her. It looks like she will be as strong as Snape in controling her self against Bella.
PSay chapter 6 . 2/8/2012
This is terrible. Poor Sarah. To be forced to deal with Bellatrix trying to gain control over her mind and the pain from the mark when Snape and Malfoy are close by is terrible. I hope there is some way to release her from this mark and the curse it carries. I look forward to more of this story. pms
Mrs Yaya chapter 5 . 1/26/2012
It seems that even at school Sarah will have a hard time. With both Snape and Draco with marks along with Harry's scar it will be very trying for her. I am glad she talked to Jinny. Now if she can just avoid all these problems.
PSay chapter 5 . 1/25/2012
Things are getting worse for Sarah. The dark marks are deffinitely hurting her. I hope they can find a cure for her soon. The horcrux in Harry's scar is deffinitely part of Voldemort and it affects Sarah badly. I look forward to more of this story. thanks for writing. pms
Mrs Yaya chapter 3 . 1/23/2012
I really feel for Sarah but Iam glad that Prof Dums has talked to her and found out the info she had. I hope she survives this year and that love will end her bond with Bella.
Mrs Yaya chapter 4 . 1/23/2012
I think its better to have in your head instead of Bella. This child is on the verge of a nervous breakdown. I am glad that Harry' night mares have stopped but poor Sarah is seeing the worse throught Bella. It seems the more she is around those who truly love and care about her are healing her but then Bella sneakes in.
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