|Reviews for My sister Melody|
| Charlotta Gryffis chapter 16 . 9/5/2013
| The Elo chapter 16 . 7/20/2012
I love this story, I was so caught up with it.
I literally was lost.
The way River left that message in the diary was perfect for the last chapter.
Also the very ending gave it a sense that it hadn't really ended, she had just 'moved on'.
I know that you wrote this ages ago, but I just found it and wanted to let you know how brillant
I thought it was.
Because it really was.
| Mrs. 11th chapter 16 . 1/11/2012
Oh, I love this story. I started tearing up a bit at the end, when Abby died. 'Least she gets to see her Melody again.
| PresidentTheAwesome chapter 16 . 1/10/2012
This was lovely and a really interesting and different way to show River's timeline sort of thing through the eyes of someone else and I found it really touching :')
| CyanB chapter 16 . 1/10/2012
That was wonderful. You hit all right notes.
Thank you for sharing this.
| clonedmemories chapter 16 . 1/9/2012
Ahh, this was amazing! Such a beautiful, wonderful, touching ending to Abby's journey.
| Kerjen chapter 16 . 1/9/2012
I never expected River to leave something to Abby in her diary. That was an amazing touch.
| Kerjen chapter 15 . 1/8/2012
Wow... so poignant. First, that she goes back to see all the family moments she missed. And then, there it is... she's headed for the Library, not knowing this is it for her. Will the Doctor come to tell Abby? Or is she left to figure it out?
So very poignant.
| Someone Who Wants a Fez chapter 15 . 1/8/2012
Next chapter just HAS to be the Doctor telling Abby what happened to River. It'll be so sad!
| Kerjen chapter 13 . 1/6/2012
This is fantastic! I love how you're showing the differences in their relationship - the closeness and the problems that would come from such a unique family. Every time I click on Next chapter, I wonder if it will be some message about River at the library...
| clonedmemories chapter 12 . 1/6/2012
Oh my gosh, I love this!
The progression through the ages, through each significant event is so interesting, because you have the narrative voice at each age spot-on. Even with the more subtle, adult differences, you can tell Abby's becoming older, wiser.
| PresidentTheAwesome chapter 9 . 1/2/2012
Awww, really felt sorry for River :)
| TheGirlWhoImagined chapter 7 . 1/1/2012
I like this keep up the awesome work _
| InvisibleBlade chapter 6 . 12/30/2011
Awesome Story XX
| cmartlover chapter 3 . 12/28/2011
It's a cut story so far and I think it's told from a very interesting POV. Great Job!