|Reviews for Traces of the Trace System|
| arinhel.melleide chapter 1 . 6/10/2013
You know that is something I have wondered about... It's actually never addressed...
| Brokenangelsely chapter 1 . 1/12/2013
Hahaa Poor Rain! :D You should do a Drabble Challenge :)
| general zargon chapter 1 . 9/5/2012
RAOTFLOL! Rain, when you figure out how to get the Trace system off, be sure to let Omnicat post the answer! I want to know too! I laugh at the thought of Rain asking Domon about that, and I hope that you write more for this fandom! Please keep up the excellent work!
| TheElegantFaerie chapter 1 . 1/28/2012
Oh this is genius! I'd love to see it continued with Domon finding out that Rain can't get the suit off! That'd be sweet to read! :)
| Female Heero Yuy chapter 1 . 12/29/2011
xD Awww it was too short, you could of made it longer.
Honestly I had a similiar idea, but it was from Domon's perspective...xD I hope you'll reconsider and make it a bit longer. Cause it's a great start, but more could be added to it.