Reviews for I Want You
Such an awesome story! You rock!
I don't mean to be intrusive or anything but what is your language or nationality?
Awesome story again. Keep on writing!
Meridian Diamond chapter 1 . 4/25/2012
Haha! Your English is adorable )

This was awesome! I had fun reading! Thanks for writing it .
HanamiKaze chapter 1 . 12/31/2011
Cute. If you're worried about your English, find a Beta Reader to check it.
Vocal-Luv chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
I was so...awed when I read's so cute...I LOVE THIS STORY!

Toki no Miko chapter 1 . 12/27/2011
Hello Sakura-san~! Toki's here to review your fic~~ XD

wait! I know this story~! it's from a rinlen strip comic right~~?

good story for me~~ I don't believe that you're an Indonesian~~ you must be american right? *plak!

keep writing rinlen fanfic for me, okay? onegai~~

see ya in another story~! Toki
Eukari-KIiP chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
I like it a lot!

I thought the story was wonderful. I could sometimes tell when grammar was off, but you explained that English wasn't your first language. But, even though English isn't your strongest point, I thought that the grammar was much better than even native speakers! Keep writing! I will be waiting for the next chapter.
Blue Neonlightshow chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
Hm... something about this story seems... familiar... OH RIGHT! It's from that comic strip of Rin and Len. I'm glad you put that in there. That was a nice oneshot!
LenxRin chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
awwww that was soooo cute!
ShiNesky chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
Aww, So cute. From my guess I think you got this from a manga strip right? but you made a great ending for it and don't worry English is not my first language too but I didn't notice any errors at all, you did a great job!