Reviews for Misplaced Memories
alabama chapter 5 . 1/8/2012
Oh, she's awake! And she's ok! So happy...
KYTIVAFAN chapter 5 . 1/8/2012
Again, you took away my ability to form words... Wow.
tivamcabby5 chapter 4 . 1/8/2012
aww please update soon :)
KYTIVAFAN chapter 4 . 1/6/2012

that's the only word I have right now. maybe more will come later.
rubiesandrain chapter 4 . 1/4/2012
Aw! The end is so sad! Update soon! :)
NotYetLostFaith chapter 4 . 1/4/2012
This is a brilliant story. Oh my gosh I cannot tell you how much I love this chapter especially the last couple of lines. Well done! Keep it up!
gsr4ever chapter 4 . 1/4/2012
OH Tony! Great job
Tiva lovah chapter 4 . 1/4/2012
I swear this just gets better and better- It is so poingant and realisitc that it made my breath catch. Please update soon!
coleykgapeach chapter 4 . 1/4/2012
OOOhhh, God..this story is driving me nuts! in a good way... but Tony at the end..and the interaction between him and Gibbs and Tim at work? heart crushing...I can't stand it! Good chapter.
Schmaltzy chapter 4 . 1/4/2012
Your depiction of Tony's mounting despair is spot on, Pough, and you rip my heart out with that last line (lucky I had tonight's episode to cram it back in).

I'm thinking there's more pain ahead, even when she does wake up. :(

Meanwhile ...

"She tethered him to care, to devotion, and let him fly unbound into passion."

This in more poetry than prose, m'dear. Just lovely! :)
mia58 chapter 4 . 1/4/2012
The roller coaster of emotions is agonizing. Poor Tony. But I love how real it feels. It kept me glued to each word. I know it's a slow process, but I hope Ziva wakes up soon.
sourmelonsoup chapter 4 . 1/4/2012
Aw. Angsty Tony is showing his devotion to Ziva...
easylion chapter 4 . 1/4/2012
Great update!
Robern chapter 4 . 1/4/2012
Its wonderful! I hope Ziva wakes soon!
mprmusings chapter 4 . 1/3/2012
wow- i don't even know what to say. seriously. what an outstanding update. heartbreaking, hopeful and yet devastating. my favorite lines:

"Tony clamped both hands to the edge of his counter, locked out his elbows, and let his tired head fall to his chest.

And wept."

i can't wait for the next update and of course, i hope that there will be a bit of fluffy tiva though the tiva that has been written so far is tiva all the same. thank you for sharing your story.
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