|Reviews for Bleach: Deathberry Chronicles, Reprise|
| magical fan18 chapter 12 . 8/5
I am loving this fic and how you have written it.
Cannot wait for more, by the way nice touch making Rukia a Visored.
| Mangastream7 chapter 7 . 8/4
This plotline shows promise, however, it is quite painful reading through it. There are a lot of grammatical errors, even of the most basic nature (e.g. capitalization and punctuation), never mind things like syntax. I would love to read how the story continues on if it weren't for the fact that the writing skill itself needs drastic improvement. You should get a beta reader to help fix and rewrite the story if you intend to make it a masterpiece that it can be!
Excellent idea, just work on your writing skills.
| Ultimate-Zelda-fan chapter 8 . 7/20
I will admit that the original Bankai you made for Yamamoto is very impressive, however I feel that his canon Bankai, Zanka no Tachi, is far more bad*ss!
| Alex2909 chapter 12 . 7/5
love this story and how ichigo is being portrayed
| Lord Dream chapter 3 . 6/28
And I cant even get through this chapter. You need a beta. Badly. Your issue? Grammar. Also, Contractions! USE THEM!
| Lord Dream chapter 2 . 6/28
Another fail. This chapter also needs editing.
| Lord Dream chapter 1 . 6/28
Over perfect English. Learn to use contractions.
| scaryorange chapter 11 . 6/14
Ew, Rukia-centered chapter? I think not.
| Guest chapter 12 . 4/1
i've just come across your story and it's been an awesome read so far... I'm kind hoping you'll come out with some new chapters soon :)
| Spirit Of The Black Wolf chapter 11 . 3/29
Fantastic story hope you update soon
| Mayflowers123 chapter 2 . 3/28
when I read the word daito for a minute I read dildo I was like WTF!
| Really chapter 1 . 3/14
*clicks on fic with interesting summary*
*Sees the words "holy crap her breasts are huge" used as a dialogue example.*
*Reader realises he is dealing with an immature male and the content can't be that great with that as an opening*
*clicks back button*
Thanks for the warning so I didn't waste my time.
| Windying chapter 12 . 2/27
Updated soon damnit!
Love this fiction by the way.
| reptoholic chapter 9 . 2/25
Should he not be immune to Kyoko suegetstu due to him touching it ?
| reptoholic chapter 8 . 2/25
I hope he kills him.