new-Necro03 chapter 1 . 8/30
Why did you have Rin start at 16 in the beginning of the chapter and randomly had her be 6 for bedtime after the indigent with the merchant? Then when he is sending her away to train, it ask seamed like she was 6 and it transitioned, suddenly, to her being 16 with trouble in the South...
lara5170 chapter 37 . 8/6
Oh boy. Please tell me he did not rape her body...
I am looking forward to reading more of this
lara5170 chapter 25 . 8/6
Damn...what happened? Did someone interrupt them?
lara5170 chapter 24 . 8/6
This was terribly funny but now I am kind of hoping they get caught in an another awkward position
lara5170 chapter 19 . 8/6
What the hell is going on now?
lara5170 chapter 13 . 8/6
When is Kagome going to get to meet Shippo again? I would think she'd have been excited about it but even Sango and Miroku have not been back to check on her and she didn't ask about them or Shippo?
WarriorWolfQueen chapter 30 . 12/23/2016
Please update, continue, and complete! I LOVE this fanfic and will follow it till the end!
LoveInTheBattleField chapter 30 . 2/22/2015
Nice chapter, keep it coming. Happy Belated Valentine's Day!
LoveInTheBattleField chapter 29 . 11/4/2014
Good chapter, keep it coming.
LoveInTheBattleField chapter 28 . 10/31/2014
Nice chapters, keep it coming
OptimusPrimegirl213 chapter 1 . 10/31/2014
Keep up the good work loving it all
shadowedhunterX chapter 26 . 12/22/2013
Please update as soon as possible
Psyka chapter 26 . 12/10/2013
Awesome i love it please please please update again soon
Guest chapter 1 . 5/13/2013
Your spelling is better here than it is on . Also your tenses on dokuga are annoying the hell out of me and I can't put a review on there because you have anonymous reviews disabled. I'm not flaming you or nothing but some of the stuff in your chapter needs editing with focus on the usage of your tenses. You're using present tense instead of past and my mind keeps trying to tell me what it should be reading (saying) instead of what's actually posted. I do like your story though.
SangoMarie chapter 26 . 1/6/2012
LOVE THE STORY! Great job! :) cant wait for more!
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