|Reviews for The Cruelty and Fairness of Fate|
| Amy chapter 29 . 5/29
I swear, I come back to this fanfiction year after year since I first discovered it maybe 15 years ago(?). This series is seriously one of my favourite fanfiction series to read and I don't think I'll ever forget about it. I'm sure I've left reviews before, but just wanted to thank you so much once again 3
| luvnanofate chapter 29 . 5/8
Personally, I think this story does not portray a good outcome for young women. Just look at the USA's Bible Belt where teen pregnancy is the highest in the whole country and so is illiteracy.
| tyc123 chapter 29 . 3/11
What’s that? You finished this story in like, 2003, and I’ve discovered and fallen madly in love with it in 2021? You’re an artist. If you’re still fond of this one, my only suggestion would be adding Minako and Rei as characters; I stumbled upon this looking for Reinako on an old archive, and you did a beautiful job with them. Thanks for posting this and letting it survive for us late arrivals.
| Em chapter 29 . 12/6/2018
This was so good! I loved every second of it!
| btvscharmedgirl chapter 29 . 11/3/2016
First off I want to say that this is at least the second time I've read through this story. The first being back around 2010. I can't remember if reviewed before or not. If I didn't then Om sorry, and if I did then you eat a so for one deal.
This is so very well written. Unlike a lot of fan fiction, (my own included) it read as though I was a real book. It was insightful, funny, made me cry at several spots, and despite having already read the story, captivating. I've been reading nearly none stop for days, only stopping to sleep, go to work, and watch SailorMoon Crystal.
You did an amazing job with this. Truly.
| ghqm chapter 12 . 2/22/2016
i think your arguments why she had sex with the boy are strange specially if she says she loved ami all the years
| HonooNoKuin chapter 16 . 6/15/2014
Wonderful chapter! You brought tears to my eyes.
I was very pleased to read about how things happened between Rei and Minako. The first date, the first kiss and then the ring... Wow. It was extremely well done; very romantic and tasteful.
Thank you so much for this piece.
| HonooNoKuin chapter 8 . 6/14/2014
Loved the part where Rei "tells" Mamoru the "news"! I could imagine his dumbfound expression watching as she pulled Minako into a searing kiss right before his eyes! LOL!
I must confess I've started to read this only because of Rei and Minako, but the story revolving around Ami and Makoto got to hooked!
| What's-Yer-Offer chapter 27 . 1/12/2014
I read this between classes and work for a week. I just now got the time to review! Really love how you captured everyone!
The little Haruka and Michiru parts nearly killed my poor shipper heart.
Ami and Mako though... Perfect! Honestly.
| Ruka-Roxy83 chapter 4 . 12/11/2013
Love that you brought the Outers in this but it just wouldn't have been right without them. _
| Ruka-Roxy83 chapter 2 . 12/11/2013
I really know how Ami feels about finding out Makoto slept with someone else.
| Ruka-Roxy83 chapter 1 . 12/11/2013
I can't wait to read more of this. Not sure why I have never read this before hand.
| CallMeAnonymous chapter 29 . 6/6/2013
This has been a very good read. Thank you for writing it with such good pacing, storyline, characters and overall proper language. There were some repeated mistakes that, though a little distracting, can be ignored. 'Drug', for example.
I'll admit the pregnancy part was kind of weird, though it's mostly because when I think Sailor Moon, I think adventures with fighting the bad guys; not Sailor Moon characters living out normal everyday lives. However, holding regard only for the latter situation, I think you have written it very well. I think the Rei-Minako situation was nicely depicted-sorry to say, but I kind of liked their story better than the Ami-Makoto parts, though still very good.
Humour was very nicely placed and done. I couldn't help but smile at practically all of them. Usagi probably had all the funniest lines, and her character was not lacking despite being a side character here.
I'm glad you brought back the siblings in the end. Since their appearance, I've been wondering what their role was-just an enemy to reveal Makoto's situation, or something larger? Seems like it's the former now, but I like that they have a little characterisation anyway, and that there's some closure to their appearance.
So, all in all, very good job. And thank you for the read. Good luck with any future writings.
| Guest chapter 29 . 2/16/2013
I was really into the story until the last chapter, I hate it, who r shin and all of them, I don't understand
Could u by any chance rewrite the last chapter plzzzzz :-)
| reiko of mars chapter 29 . 10/28/2012
One of the best long-running SM fics I've ever read! I hope you don't mind that I read it for the Rei/Minako. The way you portrayed them was so heartfelt, and I loved the background you had on them in contrast to Makoto and Ami. The fact that they're more like devoted best friends than lovers is so endearing, and I appreciate that the main source of conflict comes from their parents, and not each other because they understand each other too much.
Anyways, excellent story! This actually took me several months to read because I didn't want to rush reading your awesome storytelling. Bravo!