|Reviews for The Cruelty and Fairness of Fate|
| Lily8193 chapter 29 . 10/2/2012
I really love this story, just read it for the third time...
Just, why "Ken"?! That creeps me out every time I read it!
But anyway, I love the sequel, too!
| chaosgenerator chapter 1 . 9/28/2012
awesome writing. the story just flows and i couldn't stop reading it.
| PinaPoe chapter 29 . 1/29/2012
It has been a number of years since I read this and I really really enjoyed the re-read. I noticed you are working on another and I am very much looking forward to that. This was a very good story!
| Angelsheart85 chapter 29 . 8/10/2011
this was long, complete, very well organized, it took me few days to read slowly and completely, but in overall it was mesmerizing! I really enjoyed ur story a lot! Thnx for involving all the characters and making the story not that full of dubious things and hard things for all of them to go through :) You did a wonderful job and I would like to thank you for this story a lot! :)
| TirOrah chapter 29 . 2/1/2011
Well! This certainly was an experience. I wonder where I should start...
First of all, thanks a lot for this wonderful read. I admit I was a little shocked when Mako-chan turned out to be pregnant, and it bothered me for a whil when I read the story. Eventually it just fell into place, though, and it became an enjoyable part of the story. Not to mention an amusing one, with Usagi blaming the dinner first and later telling Makoto to "fix" her water. XD
I could go on and on about how great this story was written and how the characters just worked, but I'm sure you've already heard all that in those 300 reviews I'm seeing here. The only pointer I'd like to give you is that the past tense of "drag" is "dragged". Hope that made sense! XD
So, I will now applaud you. For not only drawing me in so much I spent HOURS reading a fic featuring a pregnant Makoto (I love her and all, I just haven't gotten used to it still T_T) and thoroughly enjoying it! I'll now continue reading the next part of this epic tale of romance, drama and Usagi-bashing. :) Thanks for the guide in your profile. Jaa ne!
| Fusionmix chapter 3 . 6/11/2010
I don't know if I've ever reviewed this. But this is my favorite Ami/Makoto story in the entire archive, not to mention one of my favorite Sailor Moon stories period.
And I couldn't resist bumping your number of reviews up to 300 :P
Keep writing. You have a gift for characterization, as well as saying a lot in few words, without a need to overuse adjectives or spew extraneous details. That's rare.
| Ducks-Go-Aflack chapter 3 . 5/25/2010
Teen pregnancy is not something that belongs in something like Sailor Moon. Write about something else next time.
| Gemna chapter 29 . 4/1/2010
I do like this story. I think it was one of the first Sailor Moon fics I ever read, now that I think about it. Found it by accident years ago, and I think I read it pretty much non-stop from start to finish. And then I reread it when I found it again.
Looking forward to more stuff from you!
| Saiyagurl87 chapter 29 . 9/2/2009
wow this story is amazing!
| Sainji chapter 29 . 8/2/2009
I have to admit, that there were tons of moments in this story that had me grinning like an idiot! Especially the part where Hotaru and Chibi-Usa tested the relaxation training on Setsuna. Really well written, and very cute.
| Zalleon chapter 29 . 7/23/2009
Wow, that was a labor of love! lol, very good! best SM fanfic i have read yet.
| sage561 chapter 8 . 7/20/2009
Firstly I really am enjoying this story thus far. This is magical especailly considering that I absolutley hate Ami/Makoto pairing. I actually enjoy it in this story. The way that you have the girls act out at certain times especailly in chapter 7 when Ami tries to feel the baby.. well wow.. I don't think anyone could write that moment better. Now.. to continue reading.. you've got me addicted.
| hatsumi225 chapter 29 . 10/28/2008
| mario123 chapter 29 . 8/28/2008
This story has to be one of the best stories I have ever read. I honestly could not stop reading this. I wish you would do another. When I finish this review here I will begin looking for more works of yours!
| JasonGroff chapter 3 . 8/13/2008
Hey, I just started reading this. (gee look who's late to jump on the bandwagon eh?) Anyway :-) I'm just at chapter three and I wanted to drop a line to say that I absolutely -adore- the characterization of Ami's mom. She's so sweet, definitely hope she is in the story more as it progresses.