wow! how are they gonna handle that? finish up, this is pretty good.

Oo; VERY nice! _v I don't review many stories, but I felt this one just HAD to be reviewed since it was neat and stuff! Write more! I beg o' you!

please continue i really enjoyed it

I love the story; it has many possibilities, and I will be watching for it

one thing; you are focusing only on Mako and Ami

and ignoring Rei, and Mina;

it makes the story out of balance; still have time to fix that and

pretty please?

could you put more detail on Rei, and Mina?

they are such a fav couple

as for the rest; great story; I will certainly love reading more

thanks for writing it for us; for sharing your talent

oooooohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh... evil... Mako can't be... awooohhhhhhhh... poor mako... poor AMI! Anyway.. love your story, I hope you continue! _*

nani? what does that mean? Did she teat positive for something like AIDS of cancer? how sad...