Reviews for Puppy Love
XxfictionalbookcharacterxX chapter 1 . 8/5/2013
JenniferxAndy OTP-ness.
I have to say, since I love this pairing and series, I automatically clicked on this. But, and no offense to you, I found the writing very...uninteresting. You write as if giving a recap of events instead of telling an actual story, and it felt as if I was reading a script or book report rather than a fic. My advice would be to not rush by so quickly-use sensory detail, vary your sentence length and structure, etc.
Two more things: I think the "sweatdrop" part and the "I love you, you love me..." part really didn't fit and just made the story feel a bit awkward. Yes, these things may work in manga, but remember: writing for manga and writing for stories are two different things, and sometimes crossing over the styles can mess up an otherwise good piece.
Anyway, on to the positive! I really like the idea, I just think it could be written differently. Hurry up and update. u
KawaiiAnime101 chapter 1 . 4/30/2013
Make more chapters! I can't wait! You left of at a cliff hanger, so tempting... I love the fan fiction a lot! People need to make more with Dr. Andy and Jennifer k. :3
Katie chapter 1 . 1/25/2013
I loved this! I can't believe there aren't many Amazing Agent Luna fanfics...anyway, I ship this pairing SO hard! PLEEEEEASE countinue!
Girl-luvs-manga chapter 1 . 9/28/2012
Please continue there aren't many FICA for this story
Lalalupin chapter 1 . 5/3/2012
Hahaha, this was great! Very, funny, and the writing was excellent :) I really hope you update soon, because I really wanna know what happens next!
WhiteKitsuneFox chapter 1 . 4/12/2012
Reviews are like porn, lol. Great story. I feel like your description is a little flat though, and your sentence structure is a little repetitive.
ThePhantomFeline97 chapter 1 . 4/5/2012
Oh wow this was really good i hope you continue i wanna see how this ends.
FireWolfHeart chapter 1 . 1/31/2012
Oooh! Creepy random ninja time! Controls isn't very good when it comes to normal, everyday conversations, is she? .'
MMOandFrUK chapter 1 . 12/30/2011
That was AWESOME! Keep up the good work!
Ah.Choseong chapter 1 . 12/29/2011
I feel very weird reviewing ur story after what you said... but I recently became a fan to :)and i was like wow just two but.. anyways I think mabey i would write about to but... naw.

anywayssssss PLZ UPDATE!3