Reviews for Because of What Used to Be
rebecca-in-blue chapter 1 . 8/11/2015
I love this story and the way you convey a slowly widening gulf between Erik and Charles - and the way Raven picks up on it. Wonderful work.
Lucky's Girl chapter 1 . 2/27/2012
Hi,

That was just awesome! I loved the ending scene and how it seemed to just pull up what he was feeling and keeping hidden while Mystique was there. The metaphors were really great too and I liked that you added Magda in there and sort of gave him another reason there. It was really good, thanks!

~Paige
Marvelous Pond chapter 1 . 12/26/2011
Good little story great wording with the whole 'chasm' concept. I love when people put in Magda!