Reviews for The Rising
XForgottenEternityX chapter 6 . 2/8/2013
Emil! This is an amazing chapter! And that is an understatement! Imagine how high you've peaked in the best story writers of all time! Starting off, I loved your side notes (even if they didnt have me in it) and Happy is just so adorable, I couldn't stop loving that cat!

This chapter is an amazing birthday present, even if it wasn't meant to be one! I love how you revived Adele and Niko from the dead and showed their side of the story. I always loved both of them and I wish that they didnt die. ( Anyways, lots of Niko/Adele moments and lovely flashbacks. Heartbreaking song that Adele sang! I've heard "on my own" on Glee, so I was surprised you chose that song for Adele to sing! O.o

Is that Kathia girl important? Just wondering since she had a full name. Sorry, full names usually mean that that person is important.

By the way, are you ever going to have Cecille participate in your story...I MISS HER TOO! well I loved this chapter, Niko and Adele are members of the play now, eh? I'm actually really excited for the next chapter. Thank you and most definitely keep up the amazing work! _

Colette's a Bimbo chapter 5 . 8/9/2012
Lmao! I love this fic. Did I ever tell you that? The writing is amazing and the storylije is awesome. A few grammatical errors here and there but hey, no ones perfect :D
Isn't misama from tales of the abyss? Me loves Luke 3 ...and Guy 3 ... and Jade 3... and Asch 3... and Sync... pretty much all of the male characters except for Vandaldesca *hiss!* and Ion xD and largo! Zeles does not likebushy beards! or eyebrows xD

The storyline is certainly new and original :D I was screaming and freaking out when Nikon was brought back to life :D:D:D so happy! :D
The love triangle is really awesome too :D but personally I like l'arcXryfia more :D Adele pissed me of.I think it was her voice xD but hey, I won an award for acting out some of Adele's scenes xD
Anyways back to topic xD (I get sidetracked easily hey look! A bee :D) this chapter was full of surprises and details ;D something my writing lacks. Hur hur xD I'd kill to see Alf (shoes! Is that howyou spell his name? Not sureif that's the Luminous Arc or the Arc Rise Fantasia one... xD) with a beard! But me no like bushy beards xD lolz

Well! Kudos to you!I'm officially jealous of you cuz of your awesome writing skills :D keep up the great work :D
3rdNightingale chapter 5 . 7/15/2012
Nice chapter! I knew you would write a better story than me. ;)
XForgottenEternityX chapter 5 . 7/15/2012
Very well written, Emil! Finally, a love pandemonium! It's about time ;D Haha you're right, it's so confusing.
Oh my god, i cried for the father-daughter moment, Poor Ryfia!

And Roland, stay away! :P It better be L'Arc with Ryfia, or else... Im joking, just keep it up! It's an awesome, story and can't wait for the next chapter!
Colette's a Bimbo chapter 3 . 6/12/2012
standing in line at six flags to ride x2...its been three hours... Waaaaah

Omg. I was practically crying. Niko was so awesome! I wouldve cried a bucket of tears when he dIed, but the voice over was so bad XD
XForgottenEternityX chapter 4 . 4/22/2012
Awesome Job, Emil! Keep it up! it was such a good chapter! And thank you for introducing me so well into the "Jolly Men's" team ;D

Please keep writing!
Colette's a Bimbo chapter 4 . 4/16/2012
Lolz, don't worry! I didn't update my fics for over a month now! XD

The AN had me ROFL! Scarring, yet possible!

Roland sounds awesome! I think it's because he called L'arc Mr. L'arc though! Good ol Niko! ... ... WAAAAAAAAAAH!

wait, did I read Chapter 3 yet? I'm not sure... ... CURSE MY HORRIBLE MEMORY! So, I was sort of spacing in the beginning, but very nice chapter! It feels great to read an ARF fic!
Hachibukai chapter 4 . 4/15/2012
Waaah, it's finally revealed. :D

I guess Roland was shocked.

Great chapter! Please update soon. :D
3rdNightingale chapter 4 . 4/15/2012
wow roland is related to L'Arc AND Rastan. You were right I didn't expect that.
Zero Cifer chapter 3 . 2/15/2012
-Sniff sniff- More flash backs! Makes me so sad to hear this. Nice fanfic Emil.

PS. Are you a girl? Cuz if you are in Japanese you dont use kun at all for girls. But both boys and girls can use Chan. Just to let you know -puts hands in air in defense- im not showing off or anything.
Zero Cifer chapter 2 . 2/15/2012
Its sad to hear that she died. I hate hearing about character deaths or even just remembering them (despite the fact i both read and writ about them, weird.) and reading those flashbacks just really made me more sad
Zero Cifer chapter 1 . 2/15/2012
Interesting so far. Its not OC. That's what I mostly look for in a fanfic.
Lenhart-F chapter 3 . 2/15/2012
Here I am once again ;)

I won't be able to leave a supermassive review like the ones you left me, because I have no idea how to u.u

First... You made Gray a real exhibitionist! x)

Ok.. now for the story.

You've done a good job with the new characters, I think I know what you meant with the complexion on Phillip's behavior. Double personality perhaps?

What I mean is, you described them well, and gave them powers with speeches, which I think is so cool. Create more speeches for the spells x)

Their personality is also well worked on. In other words, they could easily be another real character on Arc of Fantasia. (In my opinion that is u.u)

Now that I took a closer look at Niko's story I feel quite bad for his death, even though I never played the game O_O

He seemed to suffer a lot, and his only friend was a total jerk to him, so yeah... poor Niko.

I've noticed Niko's last words echoing in L'Arc's mind like you told me before. You're such a sadist x)

Now this Rolland guy... such a mystery.

"L'Arc, this Rolland guy is evil! Don't trust him." That's what went through my mind as soon as I read about him xD

You seem to have a slower pace on your story, I foresee a lot of chapters.

I'm sorry, but I'm out of fuel for anymore typing... Seriously need a rest for now.

I'll see you on your next chapter Emil, until there, good luck with the story, convert Gray back into a non-exhibitionist, and keep writing as you do it very well!

See ya!
Hachibukai chapter 3 . 2/15/2012
Kyaaaaaaaa *ultimate fangirl scream*

G-Gray's treat *massive nosebleed* was awesooooome!

Okay, review! :) Teehee! You finally updated BFFFEEEE. :)

Anyway, *raises left hand* was the other secret character you told me about 'Roland'?

And uh, I totally felt all stiff when L'Arc mentioned Adele :

Ryfia's so cute! ~,~

Hihihi. Ten ten's gone all delusional! ~o~
ForgottenEternity chapter 3 . 2/14/2012
That was amazing! so sorry you didn't win...Great story and all, cant wait for the next chapter! ;D
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