Reviews for Seperation Insanity! Dragon Egg Returns!
Dorin chapter 1 . 8/20/2012
LOL this is insane...! I luv fic like this. :* write more ;)
Considus chapter 1 . 4/13/2012
HILARIOUS FANFIC!
811 chapter 1 . 2/29/2012
At first I thought the fic is weird but now it is creative.I enjoy it very much,thank you:/
boyxaudungcoi chapter 1 . 2/26/2012
kakakakaa!like this story already it is so funny it made me laugh too hard i will cry because my jaws hurt like try to write more stuff cause I'm hooked
AzureKnight2008 chapter 1 . 2/13/2012
Hi, it's been long since my last review. My bad... I shouldn't have let one of my fav writers down. _

Let's begin! Well... actually, the title gave me SHOCK. u_u Sorry I couldn't help it. Remembering how many troubles THAT egg had caused to our heroes/heroine last time they met. :chilled: However, I felt so relieve since everything didn't quite as "terrifying" as I had thought. :smile: Little Shiro was so cccuuuuuuuttteeeeeee! :squeeze the little creature: No wonder Kasumi was driven crazy upon seeing the little guy. :LOL at BIg-SHinY-sPArkinG eyes and all: XXDDD I love them, I love ALL the gags you put in the 1st half of the shot, especially the dragon father's reaction upon our new friends' "cruel" remarks on his FAT body and when little Shiro thought Asura died in Ryu's body. :laughingsohardnrolledoffchair: oo Eh. :gets up: Everything seemed PERFECTLY fine until the little dragon stopped behaving and... switched to his typically naughty mood! O_o GOSH! Everything happened so fast that our characters were ALL caught in his mischief, which was utterly surprising and INSANE! XXDDD Ahahahaaaaa... what BRILLIANT ideas you got there, Khaossonic! You gave everything a complete hilarious TWIST that also caused me to be hit by father for LOL(s) too much at midnight, alone. Ummm... nevermind. U_U I really enjoyed it and that's why I LAUGHED without any care for my surrounding. I love MOST the part where an anvil and frying pan POPPED out instead of the monters' normal princers, that was OOOODDDDDDDD enough.

Ahem, ; for the 2nd half, I enjoyed very the co-operation between our characters. Each of them was able to show their typical characteristic as well and that was the NICEST point of this multi-shots fic so far. Love my Blue Lord... :sigh dreamily at the Goki-Chiaki's little moment: Oh HEY! Do I suspect a triangle here? It would be if another girl as beautiful as Rika/Kagura stepped into the picture 'cuz she simply cannot resist his sweetness and gallantry; however, I can't seem to imagine how wrong things would be in the future, since Rika/Kagura is not a simple girl you know, we didn't know any of her past YET. Hopefully, later. D YOSH! How cool and BADASS Zenki-sama was when he delivered a finishing blow to the beast. Very CCCOOOOOOOOLLLLLLLL and it did remind me of everytime he BLOWS things up with his amazing/powerful/limitless strength. XP Ssshhush, shouldn't come near the red demon whenever he loses himself in that "harmful" excitement, understand? XD

Finally, I truly love the ending, the kind of reaction from Chiaki after watching the happy family of that chubby dragon was understandable. She is a girl and a girl, no matter how strong she appears to be, always NEEDS a helpful shoulder from a guy to lean on. And Akira didn't disappoint her the least. His understanding and willingness to help the girl he cares for frankly amazed me. :sniff::sniff: Then, Kasumi and Ryu acted so funny as a couple. LOL I haven't seen any real interaction between them yet, their relationship, though albeit at the lower level compared to AkiaxChiaki, is quite adorable. Now... my last comment: You're being so CRUEL to Zenki-sama. XXDDD He was hit again and again mercilessly with various ANVILS. LOL What a day...! :D

Well that's it, WAIT for my next review soon! XD

P/s: You mixed Akira's origin between the Manga and Anime, did you? O_o And that Shiro's mom is a human gave me headache. :fainted:
Uzumaki Naruto chapter 1 . 1/10/2012
Cute and insane and hilarious fic!never leave without leaving us with stomachaches from laughing do ya?DAMN! the egg returns seemingly mature but still mischievous.*gag*btw,the romance part is... it.:]
Yuna chapter 1 . 1/8/2012
Ooohh,this chapter is so cute. A bamboo monster is hilarious!I love the dragon egg he's so shy and adorable, his dad is adorable too...looking forward to see his sister,oh?did you mention a sister?I think.../lol/the two pairs are getting very close to each other,very love it to see Akira cares for Chiaki,Ryu needs to learn more/giggle/
L chapter 1 . 1/6/2012
Man,the most insane zenki fic ive ever ROCK!*thumb* somehow this is gonna be a bit of triangle?if I'm right,the goddess has sth for the blue demon.

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Devious chapter 1 . 1/2/2012
COOL FICTION!
Mr X chapter 1 . 12/29/2011
Waaa...a very good shot with lots of action and lol touches. Zenki series was my fav perhaps 4 years ago and still thing it hasn't been I believe this is not just a shot but a chapter... hm...why didn't you add the chapter number? It would be easier to keep track with.

Ps: I like the romance air in your story, plus the action. Good job.