Reviews for How He Came To Be
Cyan Symphony chapter 6 . 1/3/2013
So far the best Vindictus fanfic I've read, the only problem is that there's not more. xP Great great great story, really looking forward to reading more. :D
Guest chapter 6 . 7/2/2012
I'm loving it so far :D
However, if I had one minor criticism, i guess it would be that Fiona's true inner thoughts was kinda cliche', looking as if she hates someone but in fact truly desires him, but that's purely my personal opinion and I do think it works fairly well with the story :D
Jenni N chapter 6 . 4/16/2012
D'awww, I love this chapter! I'm glad you continued. :)
Jenni N chapter 5 . 2/19/2012
I really like this chapter. I think you capture Lann and Fiona's personalities beautifully, if not perfect. The story is entertaining and I hope you update quickly. :)
i dont have an account chapter 1 . 2/17/2012
i would like to make a request for a fanfic

can you make something angsty and romantic that is brynn x the sense that brynn wants tieve...but obviously can't leave the lab and she likes keaghan
MurderShadow chapter 2 . 12/31/2011
Your punctuation and grammar is thorough plus the sentences are coherently divided.

Also- the characters potrayed within the story are tuned and amusingly well dialogue'd ;). I hope to see more out of this fic Arist and probably introductions or origins of the four other "Heroes" soon. In the meantime, continue! ;D