Reviews for First Night
Guest chapter 8 . 12/7/2014
Guest chapter 1 . 10/6/2014
Dead already? Pls continue. your fic is good. pls continue your fic. pls.
SenRu chapter 3 . 6/11/2009

my comment is too late

anyway , I hope you complete it
Hikaru Itsuko chapter 8 . 5/21/2003
oh! wao I didn't knew this chapter was update, well it's sad, but still i like i want to read soon the nexta chapter please, what is going to happen?
White Meteor chapter 8 . 3/26/2003
*feels a growing anger towards Akira and wants to beat the crap out of him*

Poor Kaede.

*can't hold it NE longer* What the heck is wrong w/ Akira? Kaede's suffering and he's gonna go find himself a whore? And how can he say all that crap about Kaede, ok, think all that crap! Reputation, reputation! He should put himself into Kaede's shoes and try to support him and let him know he's there!

I better go before I start getting violent.

Can't wait to find out what happens next. *S*

And yes, your absence was missed. )

SnaZzy chapter 1 . 1/6/2003
Hey! please post the next chapter right away!

I love your story. u just have to do something with the grammar.
White Meteor chapter 7 . 12/29/2002
Hanamichi's such a *beep**beep*

Poor Akira, and Kaede. It's so sad *sniffles*

sLL chapter 7 . 12/24/2002
Aww... that was sad...

My god... and it's all Hanamichi's fault... this plot...

This's one of the best SenRu's i've read...

Merry Xmas and update soon

Hibiki-chan chapter 1 . 12/24/2002
So sad...*sniff**sniff* Why do they have to suffer so much.

How come it started after two weeks?

I was wondering how would Akira welcome Kaede.

Anyway, keep it up. T_T
Rory V. Pascual chapter 7 . 12/23/2002
Oh, Hana!

This is a wonderful Christmas present! But why oh why did you leave it hanging?

Regardless of the technical stuff, this is a very engaging story and I would love to read more of it. Please write soon.
ice krystahl chapter 6 . 12/19/2002
sugoi! u've finally uploaded! it's not that cliche, though. actually, it's really good. would you pair Lord Sakuragi and poor Rukawa? *aww* poor Sendoh!
Hibiki-chan chapter 6 . 11/29/2002
After reading this chapter... the more reason why I REALLY WANTED TO READ the next chapter... Hope it wouldn't be that long. Pls. don't make them suffer anymore...
White Meteor chapter 6 . 11/27/2002
*sniffle* Poor Kaede. Poor Sendoh.

I never read a fic where Sakuragi is that evil and mentally unstable. I hope he suffers. *growl*

Please don't torture Kaede-kun and Akira-kun anymore.

Waiting for next chapter.
OrOoo chapter 6 . 11/26/2002
oh.. this chapter this is really heart wrenching.. i absolutely love the way hana's mood seems to swing here and there.

look out for your slight wrong grammar and incorrect spelling though..
sLL chapter 6 . 11/26/2002

He's so cruel!

First time i've seen hana evil in a fic... definitely continue!

Your writing is beautiful!

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