Reviews for Sacrifice
Guest chapter 4 . 2/26/2015
y did she have to die!
Meatzman2 chapter 4 . 7/14/2014
That was moving, gut wrenching, head bowing emotion. A short and sweet tragedy, and all the more powerful for it.
Kara-Meir chapter 4 . 12/29/2013
Lovely story you have here. Sometimes the tragic strikes a chord better than a happy ending. At least poor Alistair has his son, small comfort he may be. Really loved the story, Coulistair for the win.
Darkladykikyo chapter 4 . 7/4/2013
Fantastic job! I loved it. It was wonderfully written and I really applaud you. I really felt for Elissa and Alistair is such a sweetheart. Hard issues to tackle and write on and you did a wonderful job.
LoboDiabloLoneWolf chapter 1 . 6/17/2013
Excuse me while I just burst into floods of helpless tears... This is tearjerker writing at it's best; beautiful, emotionally provocative, tragic, and yet you haven't fallen into the trap so many writers do and made it so grim that the sadness loses all meaning - there are moments of real levity here that make the moments of grief all the more poignent. You've tackled a serious and terribly upsetting subject matter and done it justice. And the ending, ack, I need more tissues.

PS. This review *should* be for Ch. 4 but I think I may have pressed the wrong button and sent a blank review so it won't let me send another one. Ahem.
LoboDiabloLoneWolf chapter 4 . 6/17/2013
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iPastatalia chapter 4 . 5/16/2013
im crying so bad right now. I feel so bad for Alistair...
BlackMeridia chapter 4 . 4/7/2013
O my God. I can't believe it, you actually made me cry.
This story is... simply great. Beautifully written, mostly bittersweet and in the end so, so sad and tragic. Amazing.
Miss Mahariel chapter 4 . 1/17/2013
Woosh! That was the sound of my stomach dropping and tears springing to my eyes as I read the last paragraph. Wow, very well done. Thank you for the reading pleasure...

Eve Hawke chapter 4 . 5/16/2012
Didn't see that coming, honestly. Wish it could have turned out differently. Well written. Thank you for sharing your story. :-)
Eve Hawke chapter 2 . 5/16/2012
So delightfully awkward! I always thought that Wynne was much less stodgy than she appeared to be, and I love the frank way she discusses these things with the Wardens. It isn't embarrassing, it's just medicine. Love Alistair's discomfort. :-D Well done!
Eve Hawke chapter 1 . 5/16/2012
Brave subject matter. I applaud you. Well written, and heartbreaking. I hope you're not pulling from personal experience. I've never miscarried myself, and I hope I never do (at this point I've already had my children so I don't think it's in my future). I have dealt with infertility, though, and the idea that I would never have children of my own. I really feel for Elissa.
Grannaah chapter 4 . 1/27/2012
Once in a while you come across a story that touches your heart, and this is one of them. You wrote a beautiful story, and I loved every part of it, even though the last chapter was read through tears. I really hope to read more from you

Kathi chapter 4 . 1/23/2012
Oh...god, why? WHY? Why couldn't they have been happy, why couldn't she have lived...I'm crying so hard right now, my keyboard is blurry and I can hardly type. Please...Please make a happy story sometime. They can have hardship but just, just not this...

Again, beautifully written and very in character. That's why it make it so hard...

I'm going to go curl up into a ball and cry now.
Kathi chapter 3 . 1/11/2012
I love this story. It's incredibly well written and, unlike most CouslandxAlistair stories, actually shows the problems and hardships they'd have. Once you save the world, how are you supposed to back and actually /live/ in it? Not easily, that's for sure. Really just a wonderful, wonderful job with this story. I am eagerly awaiting future updates!

And I swear, if she has another miscarriage, I am going to cry. So hard. That is how enraptured I am with your writing. I will bawl my eyes out if Elissa and Alistair have to go through this again.
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