Reviews for Damsels And Dragons
sybil 013 chapter 10 . 5/12
Hello and in answering your polite plead I'll have to say that I'm no writer just an admirer of beautifully written stories like this one... So if you do receive a critique it will be as rough as a gravel road...But I do love your words...

LovelyAgnes chapter 18 . 9/7/2016
So many questions! I am hoping you have not given up on this story!
anon chapter 15 . 3/30/2015
So Andy gets roofied by Miranda and she isn't upset? Miranda has been belittling her this entire story. Andy has been acting like naive idiot, complete opposite of how she had grown from working with Miranda. Now Miranda is kidnapped? Seems like you just wanted to add in a plot twist to try and keep readers coming back; it's a stupid plot twist... involving this while island vacation was stupid. When Andy was told about having a new task it was like seeing a dog wagging it's tail at the possibility of pleasing it's master. There is no real love shown from Miranda to Andy; it's all sexual on Miranda's part and I truly feel sorry for Andy.
This story has greatly diverged from what the summary said it would be. The writing is skipping around and we're missing important scenes because it seems like you can't stick with one plot pine to the end. This is a horribly thought out story that, in the very beginning/summary held such promise.
NeleJenny chapter 10 . 3/21/2015
Great job! Can't wait for more.
jh728 chapter 18 . 3/21/2015
So exciting. I hope that was Miranda coming to Andy's rescue.
Thanks for the read.
Awayfan chapter 17 . 9/21/2014
Wow, just found this & rushed reading it all the way through. Hope to see more soon.
jh728 chapter 17 . 5/14/2014
Great update. Andy is a little clueless. I hope Prescott can help. Or Miranda can come riding to the rescue.
Thanks for the read.
MadBoySAM chapter 1 . 2/11/2014
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Ange chapter 16 . 2/3/2014
Uh oh! Andy is in big trouble now! About to be used again? Is Miranda on the Disruptors side, and how could Miranda drug Andy, what on earth is going on!? I'm looking forward to the next installment. Thank you x
theruinedcastle chapter 16 . 1/26/2014
Great update. Hopefully Miranda is finding some answers.
jh728 chapter 16 . 1/19/2014
Great update. Andy better be careful. Hopefully, Miranda is okay and can come to the rescue.
Thanks for the read.
theruinedcastle chapter 15 . 11/16/2013
So intense! Thanks for the update.
jh728 chapter 15 . 11/16/2013
Uh, oh. Big trouble now. It was great seeing an update. Can't wait to see what happens next.
Thanks for the read.
jh728 chapter 14 . 8/18/2013
Ooh. A bit of a cliffhanger. Can't wait to see what Miranda finds out.
Thanks for the read.
jh728 chapter 13 . 6/30/2013
Yay, an update. So will Andy get a look behind the curtain and see what is really going on? Will she be able to convince Miranda? Can't wait to see what happens next.
Thanks for the read.
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