Reviews for The Ones that Break You
He who rules the sea chapter 4 . 4/18/2017
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aww chapter 4 . 5/10/2014
omg its so adorable i love your writing
thewolf74 chapter 4 . 6/15/2013
This was very good.
KevlarKitten chapter 3 . 12/15/2012
Okay this was SO well written. It was angsty but sweet at parts too. The part about the clowns? Yeah I laughed so hard I almost threw up. Man, I love this story!
KevlarKitten chapter 1 . 12/15/2012
Your Ronon and McKay are spot on! This story makes my heart hurt and made me laugh out loud. I can't wait to finish reading it!
Pornell Fangirl chapter 4 . 11/11/2012
I so very love this story. Want to wrap my arms around Evan and never let him go.
BlaiddDrwg Project chapter 4 . 1/11/2012
Best chapter yet. I love that Lorne is still uncomfortable but he has complete trust in Sheppard. Is there going to be another chapter? I really hope so!
BlaiddDrwg Project chapter 3 . 1/11/2012
Clowns. Awesome. Declarations of love. Double Awesome.
BlaiddDrwg Project chapter 2 . 1/11/2012
They are secretly cute. No doubt about it.

I love Sheppard's blunt approach to Lorne's physical boundaries.
BlaiddDrwg Project chapter 1 . 1/11/2012
Hey I have been wanting to review your story for forever but I've been reading it on my iphone and as i couldn't remember my login info I had to just lurk.

Love this story. I love how they are both kinda broken but in a very loving and surprisingly functional relationship.

I blush every time Sheppard calls Lorne 'sweet cheeks'.
sherry57 chapter 4 . 1/7/2012
Hot stuff! But also a very meaningful story that tells how someone can be affected by physical abuse but with the right support, can find the way back to enjoy physical pleasure again and feel safe with someone again. Thanks for this hon.
sherry57 chapter 3 . 1/4/2012
What a powerful chapter hon! Loved it!
blo0d StaiNed Rose chapter 2 . 12/31/2011
wow...this story is amazing; you've captured their characters (at least how i think they would be) perfectly...i love their intimacy, their issues and how they work on it together, amazing plot, amazing writing skills...this story captured me from the first xxx thank you for this lovely story :)i cant help but want more ;)
JoeyLuv chapter 1 . 12/29/2011
I think that this is one of the sweetest fics I have read. John and Evan are just so darn cute in this! Personally, I think I would have decked Everett.
sherry57 chapter 1 . 12/29/2011
Great story hon! It's great to end it there but I'd love to read more of this story...a trilogy or a verse? Thanks for this as it is however.
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