|Reviews for Redemption|
| ozlady80 chapter 8 . 12/5/2013
Very good so far but a little things its riordan not reardon, conlon not conley, pilar not juana. Sorry its just i think your story will flow more! Please update soon
| Guest chapter 8 . 10/8/2012
i'll only say this: I NEED MORE! i hope you understand:)
| Guest chapter 8 . 9/24/2012
please write more chapters soon, it is really good!
| zeke chapter 8 . 9/18/2012
it's not Juana it's Pilar
| arianrhod316 chapter 8 . 9/9/2012
I like it a lot and can't wait for more!
| Ctinaisfashion chapter 8 . 9/4/2012
i really do like the story and I am not sure if you changed the names in the story intentionally or not but the last name in the movie for brendan is conlon and manny's wife is pilar...i'm hoping tommy will beat up rick soon because it sounds like rick is gonna be punching on Aud soon if not already.
| Ctinaisfashion chapter 7 . 9/4/2012
loving the story but the last name is spelled wrong is spelled riordan
| CreggaFoeseeker chapter 8 . 9/3/2012
Finally, a new chapter! and a nice one at that. Looking forward to the next one. and I will check out that Snow White story. (i Haven't seen it yet, but my dad has, and he loved it)
| GenBou93 chapter 8 . 9/3/2012
I just found this story and I completely love it! :)
Can't wait until you update :)
| JerZeeSkyLine chapter 7 . 7/2/2012
Loving this story ! Keep going I can't wait to see what happens !
| sweetypie15 chapter 7 . 7/1/2012
I love this story update soon!
| EvilBlueAngel chapter 7 . 5/21/2012
Wow well as I always say when I'm trying 2 be funny... Shit just got real. I personally would love 2 read a fight sence where Tommy beats the shit out of this man, do u think u can make that happen?
| CreggaFoeseeker chapter 7 . 5/21/2012
prefect chapter. Glad you're back. Looking forward to the next chapter.
and dodn't be afraid to draw events out, to lengthen the time. You have a nice rhythm, a good flow. Keep it up.
| psyhcokitty88 chapter 7 . 5/17/2012
I need more! I like the fact you keep it short and simply.
| Superdani4Ever chapter 7 . 5/16/2012
YES!THANK YOUUUUUUUUUUU FOR THIS CHAPTER!
I've been dying to read more!Ok,so Audrey is a big girl,but that doesn't mean that big girls won't get in trouble either.