Just read this. I loved it.

So sad to see this go *sniff!*

I loved the story- it was A-MAZING!

9th! You must be a brill cheerleader! I can't believe the next chapter is the last, even though I know they're is a sequel!

Aw bless, so sorry about your friend! Great chapter!

MissLozzieB is like one of my best friends (we attend the same school and are in each other's classes)! But she never seems to say that word! Xxx

My grandad does the same! Loving the story so far (I'm reading it on my phone whilst watching NCIS).

I think as names for the twins could be caitlin(memory of kate) and jennifer,jenny,jen(memory of jenny shepard).if u dont like them there is always michelle from season six

Can u please please please call one of the girls Phoebe? It means bright moon I thought It would be like the bright side of the story?

Good chapter :) and I know, the Tiva was subtle, but definitely there.

idk if you watch NCIS: LA but the DENSI-ness of next week's episode is overwhelming!

Wow I just luv this story

Awww! What a great chapter :) So happy for Tony and Ziva. Too bad this is possibly the last chap :( Oh well, I can't wait for the sequel! :D

So glad you updated! I loved this chapter! I loved all of it, but I mostly love the ending. And how you even threw the waitress into the mix. I thought that was hilarious lol :) Great chapter, I can't wait for the next :)

OMG YOU WENT TO WORLDS! What cheer team do you cheer for?

Aww, sweet! But it can't end! Please at least do an epilogue for the twins :)

Aww, I love Ziva haha :D Can't wait for the next one!