Reviews for Element master
kapricon chapter 18 . 1/8
What a nice story
Guest chapter 2 . 11/19/2017
when in time Naruto had the money form it he had some fox kids in why was the red light arnd old top floor arnd of it he had 2 grils fox a blue one ice nights go and a red one gril fire gril and the 2 boys ash and his bother Danny the 2 fox kids both mix coring boy fox s Naruto keep them when he was 4 or 5 when the 4 had lose them own mom and dad when some ninjas huthers kill them off , and then the 4 had see Naruto as a big bother and father now to them , unkown to the others of the vaillge Naruto had them hading in the top floor of the red light arnd of the vaillge and kown the land lord had no way of kown Naruto back them keep them in it , when he get back he buy out the old buleding form him and he move to some new home in the west and get kill off by the thinfe king
hack.ex1 chapter 18 . 8/12/2017
you are an god among god!
Stupid chapter 10 . 7/17/2017
It will work you forgot about the gold and silver brothers XD otaku rookie
Guest chapter 5 . 7/8/2017
when in the other time Naruto an his woman sarkura had love him nnot sauske and the 2 had kill off both him and the mob boss too and then took over the mob boss own inc and when in penhound Naruto and his woman was in bed with each other and sex was on too when he get over her he had ion and then tenten in bed with him when the 3 had sit on his lep and he had his big size hands on them too say you 3 are now my lovers now ,
Guest chapter 2 . 7/8/2017
when the job was over Naruto had the money put away and used the hife of it to buy out the red light town old bar ok out and he buit a bounyhuther offices and men cave too when in the top floor Naruto had one room mack into the men cave bar and bed room too and a big size libay too and when in it he had be in some art form the men he took out and some woman too and some with big size bodds too ,when in the bar is his collan of palycads of hot woman on them .
Guest chapter 5 . 6/27/2017
when in the other time Naruto an his woman sarkura had love him nnot sauske and the 2 had kill off both him and the mob boss too and then took over the mob boss own inc and when in penhound Naruto and his woman was in bed with each other and sex was on too when he get over her he had ion and then tenten in bed with him when the 3 had sit on his lep and he had his big size hands on them too say you 3 are now my lovers now ,
SpencerDorman chapter 4 . 6/22/2017
I hope Naruto keeps the Raijin to himself. I know that he wasn't the one who killed Aoi but he is the only member of the Konoha team that is proficient in Kenjutsu, and the fact that he is the best in Konoha in said subject is just all the more reason.
SpencerDorman chapter 2 . 6/22/2017
I guess I'm used to it by now, but I've never exactly been a fan of women just instantly falling in love with the protagonist. I'm just a much bigger fan of development and build up for relationships, but I don't hate it.
Guest chapter 12 . 5/28/2017
when Naruto had found a wolf cub red eyes Kraus who was even little and his own mom and dad get kill off by some huther in the soths lands and the little wolf cub see Naruto as a bother and woking with him too he gower to 30 feet long and hads muscle in him too ,he was Naruto chife wolf of others too a blueone danny Leroy robertsons agreen one a gril name amy lee the 3 had be Naruto own wolfs and tema of spy and help too . when then then when in the woods the goup had help out porting his home too.
Guest chapter 8 . 5/28/2017
when in the time the Inuzua frilmy had some toblet with her son and she had mack it the boy do not be the clan lather and she the others had to ask Naruto to let them magerd the 2 homes troght and he do he ask her to let her dather the olders to be Naruto 2 in commer of it and he buit her a office too to woking in and a woman cave for her own ueds too .
Guest chapter 6 . 5/28/2017
when he was it the shop kown for ninja cothers Naruto buy out a blue ninja clothers and some shine too and put on a blacke jaikuet too ,when he was doing bounyhuther and he took the mob boss own money too and used it to do some home woking in the home now his new office is good too, when in the books room Naruto had buy out some old office fathuter too .when in it he put lum books and some books on woman books too ,when in the west wing Naruto had his room with a box of kown rules he mack back in the red light times and some when he get to woking with the old men too . when in the shop he wa woking on his ship the rel ray his new ship with 2 bed rooms in the boat and some old art too , Naruto it times took his ship out for some fun and he had took his grilfrined with him too ,when she get on she saw a fish gril on it she had red hair on her and a lithg bule bikle top too ,when he took his ship for go he was it the whipool couny to buit a summer home on it and Naruto find a old inn on top of it was some need woking to it when he was over it he and his woman had do some of 90 bed rooms in the home and 4 bathrooms to a big size book room Naruto put in when his woman wa sheep ing in the home Naruto took some kays to giots homes and penhouse and some towen houhhde too find more of books he took and some art too ,when Naruto sold the stuffe amileds out to a pwn shop in towns he kown of and he ueds a kown ailss Robert Kraus willams a mob thug he took out back in the red lights days and kown aouther of the blackejack the thifes biddle .
Guest chapter 2 . 5/28/2017
when Naruto had move to his mom and dad home he put in some art he get from the thifes own hiding out and some of them is woman with big size bobs and some one with little ones ,when he had them on a wall of his own home office to ee with it too is the palying cards he find when he was 3 or 4 and when living in the red light arnd of the vaillge
Guest chapter 1 . 5/17/2017
You don't deserve to live. Commit suicide.
Stormdragon6783 chapter 18 . 5/10/2017
Wow, wow, wow, you made a story in 60k words, I need to applause you, it was great, and if a future lector reads this, I highly recommend this story, it was incredible how you made the time skips, went to the important things, describe the fights and the different a powers, everything was awesome. Claps*
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