Reviews for Underneath Your Clothes - A DBZ Song Fic |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Aw! I love the style of writing and your take on the wedding. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Such an extremly cute story . great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know it may seem like I'm doing this as a repayment sort of thing... you know, 'cause I did it after receiving you review... but I promise it's not! I wouldn't review if It didn't intrest me. Personally, I enjoyed reading it. Everyone was in character, you reffered to events from the show, and there were very little, if any, Spelling/grammar mistakes. On top of all that... Yamcha came out unscathed! Better- Bulma was praying for him! All in all, this is a great fic. Your profile said that you were a reader, not a writer. At first I was sceptical, because usually the pair are a two-for-one-package deal. Then I read this, and I'm strait out disbelieving. I look forward to another story from you. Keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() odd but very very good. Im not as big of a bulma and Vegeta fan as I used to be. Lately i've been leaning towards Krillin and 18 type fics |
![]() ![]() I LOVE it! Great characterization, you really are a great writer! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey, this is a really great fanfic! (And I don't like songfics. You know it had to be good to keep my interest at 5:30 am after being up all nite. |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey, very good story, I love it! xxx steph |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was sweet and very well written. Keep writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh wow! That was incredible. I'm not one for the Bulma/Vegeta fic.s lately, but this was extraordinary! The whole motif on clothes throughout the fic. was so perfect, making the song all the more effective. The song choice itself was so interesting and quirky, it made for a good story. You kept everyone in character, which I was slightly surprised about, always a sign of a good author. And even better...you didn't trash Yamcha! Thank you! You have no idea how badly that grates on my nerves in a B/V fic. The bottom line is I loved it! You're an awesome author! _ |
![]() ![]() Email me, homegirl! All our previous interactions were done through webmail when I was on vacation, and I lost your address! ack! Ah. And I re-read parts of your fic again to improve my attitude towards the Saiyan prince. *grin* Though he's far from being my muse, he told me to tell you 'thank you'. So far I've painted a pseudo-nicer picture of him than I thought I would... :) |
![]() ![]() Yeah_! I always thought that song would be perfect for a B/V songfic! Bout time someone wrote one, and u did a GREAT job! Write more! Mebbe a sequel? (hint hint...) |
![]() ![]() Catherine, I guess you knew that I would not understand all the different expressions and I did not recognize the names mentioned but what it did for me was to get my thoughts going in all different directions. I thought of life, family, friends, emotions...and also of people we and d how they affect our lives...either for good or bad. I always felt if something comes from the heart you know it. I enjoyed reading it and keep writing. Love, Mom |
![]() ![]() ![]() *blink* You were TOTALLY inspired to write this! It shows. And it painted such a beautiful picture of Bulma's feelings for him. And you did it without bashing Yamcha (thanks!). It all rang true for last minute jitters on Bulma's part before the wedding. so perfect. Have you been there? You wrote it like you were her, or something. The visual of Vegeta flying off with a duffle bag and tux was such a nice touch, as was Bulma's silent prayer that Yamcha would find his special 'someone'. They both added so much depth to your one-shotter. I have a very tough time appreciating Vegeta's character (if you couldn't tell), but this fic made me see more to him than the hard shell he puts on (which is a good thing, considering my next fic will be addressing what happens to him after he leaves in Goku & Bulma ~_). Great writing. Sweet, uplifting, and real. I'm a tad bit happier for having read it, which my family will appreciate immensely! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sweet song fic. |
![]() ![]() awww... how sweet! |