Reviews for Paranormal Encounter
amayranni22 chapter 11 . 2/27
je je je je
MoonKishi chapter 8 . 5/14/2016
I liked Danny's conversation with all the characters in the chapter I was expecting Danny to talk to the Golden Trio but was pleasantly surprised.
i-Spit-on-Fire chapter 1 . 4/24/2016
I really like your fic! I would love to read more than just this chapter but it was hard to follow with the way you have it set up. Try to have what one person is saying in one paragraph and then what another is saying in another.
Like: "Words," Danny.
"More words," Sam.
"More words from Danny."
Instead of:
"Words," Danny. "Words from Sam." "More words from Danny."
ElizabethBathog chapter 11 . 4/22/2016
This story is brilliant! I hope this is not a dead fic since it have been a year since you updated it. I like the story and hope you will update it soon! There is so many good once that are left hanging and it make me sad.
FariyFlare chapter 11 . 3/17/2016
This is great! I can't wait to see what happens next in Danny's little magical adventure with Harry.
JediMindaugas chapter 11 . 2/3/2016
The grammar might be less than desirable, but it is quite interesting to read. I do think it is worth continuing.
JoWashington chapter 11 . 1/16/2016
This is a great fiction; I only wish the last update wasn't over two years old...!
Still, looking forward to another update... you know- whenever you get around to it!
00Midnight00 chapter 11 . 8/30/2015
It broke my heart to see I'd already reached the last episode at the moment. I'd read it so fast I couldn't believe it! Great story, hope to see more of it soon
markman12 chapter 11 . 4/26/2015
great story, can't wait for another update, i wonder what is going to happen with the CMC class, maybe something that reacts to danny.
Lalenja chapter 11 . 7/28/2014
I really liked your story.
My personal favourite is that you are making Danny mature he is not over 'childish' and still you were able to made the story very funny (franks alive! awesome)

The other thing I love to see is that you didn't put Danny in the same year as Harry, something you never see (or almost never, when they attent as students).

I can understand the struggle to keep up with the story an the expectations of the readers (I have them myself) nevertheless I hope to read more from you, this is one of the best DP/HP crossovers I've read, so far :)
Rain of the Forest chapter 11 . 7/20/2014
God I hate that imposter... He's really getting on my nerves...
jh831 chapter 11 . 5/12/2014
like the story so far
when you were talking about the colors of power, you had in perenthathases () that vlad pasmius was had red, i don't think it is. i think his is pink.
funny in parts, some parts are to short though.
so are any of danny's enemie wondering were he is at?
Do you plan on doing a parring for danny in this story. if you do, hope it isn't sam. a ghost girl or a girl from hogwarts or the french school ( i can't spell that schools name so i'm not going to try).
again, really liking the story, cant wait to see what happens next
Ryvaken Lucius Tadrya chapter 2 . 3/10/2014
Right this plot has enough potential to be interesting but I'm going to tell you right now, your writing skills need a bit of polish.

Your dialog is flat, your descriptions are bland or confusing, and some paragraphs are in need of a thesaurus. That stuff only gets better with practice and exposure, my best advice is keep writing and keep reading.

Mechanically, you've got a lot of issues. Fragmented sentences, punctuation all over the place, spelling errors, all minor things in and of themselves. The only problem is that by sheer number of errors it's making it hard to actually read the text in places.

Formatting is probably the biggest single issue. You jump from Fentons to wizards and back without any break or spacing in the text to denote the shift in perspective.

Remember: every bit of technical effort your audience makes in reading the story detracts from the enjoyment of the story itself.
realisticFantasy chapter 11 . 2/10/2014
My my, it HAS been a long time. This was a great chapter though! It seemed well thought out and detailed, but i noticed that at one point you forgot to mention Danny transformed into Phantom. For a gery strange moment i though Professor Flitwik knew his secret. You MIGHT want to fix that. Anyway, great job, and i'm looking forward to the next chapter!
martian-general-bookworm chapter 11 . 1/11/2014
Love how Danny lays down his defense here. The professors are neither to yielding or too unreasonable in my opinion. Some people make the mistake of just fawning over a character's "revolutionary" point of view, which is just unrealistic. People have reasons for their point of view too and aren't going to give when some stranger tells them they're wrong. Some people won't even listen when logic is against them, they just won't admit they're wrong like that.

I love the reappearance of Franks Alive, and the resulting horror that they inflict on the magical community.

Keep up the good work. I am one of the people at the edge of my seat for the next chapter for however long THAT takes (good luck with classes)
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