Reviews for Little Lady
AlietteJay.Mwah.X chapter 18 . 1/16/2013
Awwwr! I cried my eyes out when I thought Carla was dead!:'( and was sooo happy, ecstatic even that she wernt! I know how sad that probably sound but your such a great writer, I was so into this, it felt so real! Amazing story! Amazing end! Wow! Thanks for uploading!:) xx
AlietteJay.Mwah.X chapter 8 . 1/16/2013
I love how you said Cheryl Cole:D guesz your a fan then? I love her!:) but yes, Carla (Ali) is the most beautiful woman in the world!;) great read:) I love this Carter:) xx
AlietteJay.Mwah.X chapter 1 . 1/16/2013
Great chapter, cnt wait to read more but Carlas mums called Sharon, I get confused when people change that lol, but other than that, great read x
KeepTheHeid chapter 18 . 9/15/2012
Hey, I just read this through from start to finish and I gotta say ... it's one heck of a story! Really well thought out and really well written. You almost had me in tears with that last chapter.
Well done :)
Boo112 chapter 18 . 9/10/2012
Awww! I loved how we saw Peter remembering his Sister in this chapter. :) Amazing fic! Well Done! :)
Guest chapter 18 . 9/8/2012
:) :) :) what a beautifully written happy! Ending haha. Will miss this fic and seeing that you had updated. You are an excellent writer and that was a clever chapter. Glad you ended it happily i really did think you'd killed Carla off! Looking forward to any new fics, and or updates to your other brilliant fics!
Kelly chapter 18 . 9/8/2012
Aww I cried at the beginning thinking Carla was dead, so glad she wasn't. This story is absolute amazing. Fantastic writing, so glad you made it a happy ending for them. :) x
VeronicaConnor chapter 18 . 9/8/2012
Phew! I nearly had a panic attack thinking you'd killed poor Carla off.
You've written this so beautifully, and I'm so thrilled that you've updated but... I'm a little gutted too; I really didn't want this story to end! ;)
I hope you continue to write 'cause I really enjoy reading your stuff.
VictoriousGlorious chapter 17 . 8/23/2012
That was such an emotional chapter! I really hope Carla doesn't die, I'd love for this story to have a happy ending:') But either way, whatever you write; I know it'll be amazing. I've followed this story for the whole 8 months that it's been running aswell, and I've enjoyed every single chapter of it! I hope that you continue to write Carter fics as you're fantastic at them and I'll be extremely sad when I'm reading the final chapter, Even if it does all turn out good in the end (Which I'm hoping it might) ;)
Kelly chapter 17 . 8/22/2012
This was so sad :( i cant wait for the last chapter x
Cherry Pip chapter 16 . 8/19/2012
I love this and the little sex scene was so hot! Hope you write more of it! I just adore this whole story, I love how Peter came into her life and can't wait for the next part.
Kelly chapter 16 . 8/14/2012
Loved this, I am interested to see how you will end this fiction even though I don't want it to end x
jessicaebirch chapter 16 . 8/14/2012
Great as always and I like longer chapters, I know there harder to do...i can't seem to write longer chapters you don't need to even scroll down on I admire your o
Liarlamad chapter 15 . 8/7/2012
I wish this story didn't have to end, I'm really enjoying it. I love how caring and protective Peter is of Carla.
VeronicaConnor chapter 15 . 8/6/2012
Aww, poor Carla; she's so vulnerable.
I can't wait for the next update!
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