Reviews for The Tale Of Nemesis: Rising
addy chapter 4 . 8/1/2012
I really like this story. I can't wait to read the next chapter. Please up date soon.
AidenSurvival chapter 4 . 8/1/2012
I apologize for not keeping up. This chapter is superb, can't wait for the next. :)
Guardira chapter 2 . 7/24/2012
Hmmm, I find the way you tell the story to the reader's quite interesting. I wonder how the confrontation will go.

Will Bats can remain in one piece, or will he become dog food? Only time will tell!

Until the next time, Muse!
AidenSurvival chapter 2 . 7/23/2012
I was the first to read! :) 3
AidenSurvival chapter 1 . 6/20/2012
See? The story isn't bad. Needs motivation. GODDAMN IT HANNAH, WE DEMAND YOU WORK ON THIS FANTASTIC WORK OF ART. :D :D

BTW, this is Aiden from Facebook.
RivalsAreAllies chapter 1 . 3/21/2012
Interesting start.

There were some grammatical and syntactical errors here and there, but it was never so much that it detracted from the flow of the story.

Keep up the good work!