|Reviews for Young Justice and the Pentawizard Tournament|
| Black' Victor Cachat chapter 7 . 3/16
Nice with Conner caring for Hagrid, and LOL yeah sorry boys, but given who M'gann has regularly associated with since joining the Team, and how she deals with Wolf as a pet, Skrewts are sadly not too unusual for her
Yep, Conner certainly has possessive issue, albeit understandably
While still unclear what had first tipped them off about 'Moody,' I do like how you go about investigating him in a careful and logical process. Rita was also a good way to make it more difficulty by putting him on guard
Really hoping you get back to this story. What I particularly like is that you do not have the YJ cast dominating the story, but instead bring in useful and new stuff from the HP cast as well with them not being pushed to the side. Also that the whole Team has bits of the story involving them as opposed to just focusing on one or two heroes
| Black' Victor Cachat chapter 6 . 3/15
:-D for Conner shirtless scene!
Interesting point that Snape would be more forthcoming with students who showed a genuine enthusiasm and brilliance for Potions, something I have not seen before. That he still gives biting comments keeps it character even if he is more accepting of the duo. Nice work!
LOL for Wally giving books a point against him in Ron's book
Bagman tends to be readily overlooked, but very good point that his debts would make him a significant suspect, especially since like 'Moody' he wants Harry to reach the Cup first. Still no sign of why they are suspicious of 'Moody' outside of an apparent bad feeling.
...Until the butterbeer incident. Smooth catch, first time I have ever seen someone bring that up!
...It is hard to say whether or not the constantly changing passwords ARE careful security (not paranoid, are people out to get them) and that Wally is just saying that to dampen suspicions, or if they really are that bored. Probably a mixture of both
You know, I really appreciate Wally being Robin's date. Not only throwing in the face of Wizard prejudices, but amusing and in character even if you do not ship the pair (although I WAS expecting Zatana)
Good touch that the Mind Link is unavailable, evening the playing field
| Black' Victor Cachat chapter 5 . 3/14
Like the scene with Conner and Skeeter, and wish we could have seen the original chasing her off from Robin! LOL for Ron's suspicions being so close, particularly the glare part
Curious on what tipped them off to 'Moody'
| Black' Victor Cachat chapter 4 . 3/14
Nice and amusing touch that Wally is still in magical denial
Good finale for Dick, with a final touch with the judges
| Black' Victor Cachat chapter 3 . 3/14
LOL for what Robin does with the photo, especially how the wizards briefly think the short guy is literally part troll :-D
Nice touch on how well Artemis fares against Malfoy and totally in character for her to give Hermione that advice
Loving how the Hogwarts students have no idea they are dealing with child soldiers here
| Black' Victor Cachat chapter 2 . 3/13
First time I have seen Ron's POV for when he is being a jerk to Harry, good touch, especially on the guilt and pointing out that even Ron's own family seems to like Harry better
LOVE that scene where Conner tames Crab and subsequent stuff! Was so hoping for something like that!
| MagalyRC chapter 7 . 3/9
Please don't abandon this story is awesome! Please update! Is already 2017, Please...
| FlyingSpirits chapter 7 . 1/27
Dd you abandon this? It's 2017 right now.
| Halatia Artemis Louise Potter chapter 7 . 12/1/2016
Hey! I really suck at reviews, so I'll just say this... I love this story, and hope you continue it soon! Really hope you're doing well!
| Guest chapter 7 . 11/2/2016
This is really cool! #iwantmoreofthisgivememoreorIwillfindyou.
| littleditto chapter 7 . 10/29/2016
Seems pretty interesting. Looking forward to what happens next
| littleditto chapter 2 . 10/28/2016
Yup. Conner's animal skills can't be beat. Maybe that's another kryptonian power? Or is it just Conner?
| MJSmile chapter 7 . 6/24/2016
Can you update soon please? PLEASE!
| HarleyIvy chapter 7 . 6/2/2016
I liked the story, and I can't wait to see what happens next.
| FireD.Rion chapter 7 . 4/29/2016
Looking forward to the next chapter!