Reviews for A Choice
Guest chapter 26 . 7/15
Im crying
Guest chapter 29 . 6/14
Stories always say a mate will be avenged.
Isabella chapter 12 . 4/1
Different but nice story. Loved the characters. Thanks for sharing.
Guest chapter 5 . 3/23
I am so lost and I just started this. I mean there is no congruity and order to this. What is the story... lemons are nice but if they fit into a plot. I mean I am often not discriminatory when it comes to reading but this is seriously bad. I wonder what other's were smoking when they fav'ed this.
jk chapter 3 . 3/16
ya its pretty bad, like skip over shit bad.
my precious love?
MY Edward?
sorry but those just sounded really stupid...and the whole "i got a wicked idea" and pulled his zipper down with her teeth...acting like shes soooo naughty...god it was fucking stupid. Then she totally flips like a mental patient and gets all insecure and ...god I wanted to slap her. Shes really embarrassing.
jk chapter 2 . 3/16
I kinda hate how this is written. Bella is written like a really stupid, skanky 15 year old. " I know most people wouldn't want to be claimed or WHATEVER, but its SO HOT and totally a vampire THING" seriously? grow the fuck up. If we wanted Edward with a lauran or Jessica we'd find THOSE stories ya know? Like, Edward waited 100 years for THIS CHICK? SERIOUSLY? how fucking embarrassing.
jk chapter 1 . 3/15
what a seriously weird place to start the story...for months Edward and jake have been fighting over bellwhore and she hasn't met the cullens?
Guest chapter 32 . 11/5/2016
Glad everything ok with the wolves pack...
Guest chapter 31 . 11/5/2016
Powerful mated...indeed...edward/Bella...marcus/didyme..
Guest chapter 30 . 11/5/2016
...and I love both of you Edward Bella...
Guest chapter 29 . 11/5/2016
Kind of love wicked Edward...
Guest chapter 28 . 11/5/2016
Omg..i cried...happy tears..for their reunion...
Guest chapter 27 . 11/5/2016
Tanya ...dead...good...that was kind of unexpected..and I wish Bella kill Jacob as well...
Guest chapter 26 . 11/5/2016
God..this Renee was so abusive mother? Wth! ...
Guest chapter 23 . 11/5/2016
Woah!...awesome! You go Bella...
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