That was precious

He definitely deserved it, embarrassing her like this. Like his forcefulness and jealousy and the bit where he was thinking she had them all fooled.

You do a good job of their fighting. I loved when he caught up to her!

I really like this idea. Good start.

Loving this fic, very diffrent from all the other Hermoine/Sirius fics out there.
One thing that really bothers me- as a native hebrew speaker I can guarentee Evie is not a real word in hebrew and it certainly doesn't mean "life". But it's a nice name nethertheless :)

Very different story. I liked it. :0) Your version of Sirius was a little more ruff around the edges than my opinion of him, but I loved it in your story. Well done.

The ending could not have been any more perfect. What a brilliant read!

If the bike only answers his commands then why was Hagrid able to fly it

The Hermionie in this story is really irritating

What a lovely story! I loved it.

love this story so much ! thanks for sharing this to us.

A great story, with even better writing!

What a wonderful name choice for their child ;)

I really enjoyed the story so far but I keep dreading that this is a story where it's always hermione that has to apologize and Sirius can get away with being a douche cuz that's who he is. With the stuff he keeps pulling on purpose I find myself hoping she miscarried or aborts it preferred. If you can just let me know if he ever really does grow up a bit just for some hope would be great.

I loved this story. Once I started reading it I had to finish it to the end. I loved how happy the ending was for them because it took for freaking ever for them to get their shit together! lol