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![]() ![]() ![]() Hold on i need to understand. This dumb ass was imperiod and used and she almost died because of his lack of self awareness he endangered her life and her babies life. And shes still dating him? Are you on crack? Meth perhaps. Why are u dragging this like this, after everything you think Hermione would what just date stanley to stay away from sirius? Im so confused like this story is good but come the fuck on what sense does it make for her to still be dating him? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow This Hermione is irrational and judgmental as fuck Jesus H christ. Like I saw the comments and was like mm ill read it hut now i see and wow . What did you do to Hermione? Like pregnancy makes people a gad emotional hut her level irrationality is beyond the pale. Like can she get a grip. We get it, its a shit situation. We get it shes scared. However acting as if Sirius is a man child only capable of giving rhe middle finger to his fmaily is ridiculous. And he didnt get in the fight for nothing. Like she is truky the childish and immature one. Her ideal of being the smartest is why shes acting like this and its quite annoying. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Fantasy lover!? How are we NOT best friends!? I more than adore Gary Olike, I would choke on my tongue if I met him. Sorry… back to story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I’m absolutely loving this premise! I was absolutely honored you mentioned me in your recs. This has started so well, I’m anxious to see this build! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I cried! I laughed! What a beautiful story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love the ending. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Teddy ate the worm |
![]() ![]() This story had potential, and I do enjoy the pairing. You wrote Sirius perfectly, but Hermione I was struggling with not skipping her parts. Even for a pregnant woman she was way to entitled and irritating. I tried getting into the story, but it just wasn't flowing. |
![]() ![]() I mean i think theyre a cute couple, and i think hermionie always fancied him, I would love if you made this a continuation of "the debt of time". That mia had sirius's baby |
![]() ![]() ![]() I’ve found this years after you’ve completed it, but I absolutely adored the entire story and how you got Hermione and Sirius together! This was such a lovely story |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really really loved this story! I liked that it wasn’t easy for them to get together in the first place but in the end it was worth it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh goodness! I'm so sad that it took me this long to find this fic! So amazing! I absolutely loved it and will definitely be recommending it! |
![]() ![]() I just.. I did not enjoy this story. I think you have a good writing style, most parts are easy to read and you describe a everything well. But really, the fighting was just too much. This was almost 90.000 words of constant fighting, tears, them being with other people and Sirius being drunk. This really was not fun to read. It left me feeling angry and agitated. To be honest, I didn’t want to continue reading but the story kept captivated, which is a really good thing, and I kept hoping that at some point they would start acting like damn adults and for Sirius to stop sleeping with other people, something that always makes me feel highly uncomfortable and did not make any sense in this story. Next time get a Beta reader to help you with streamlining the story, because you could have had a lót more reviews and favorites. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this story sooo very fuking much. I cried a lot but I love a good story that can make me cry with happy tears in the end. thank you fpr writing this |
![]() ![]() ![]() he deserved for sure omg I love this story and their dinamic sooooo much |