Reviews for The Pit, Before Christmas
bugsymutt chapter 1 . 3/10/2015
This was fun to read. I bet it was fun to write, too. Very creative!
Guest chapter 1 . 5/12/2013
Beachhead stole the story.
AA - MamaBirdCat chapter 1 . 1/29/2013
Lol this was wonderfully funny and still so unofficially typical joe..
Certifiably-Mad chapter 1 . 1/24/2012
Guess what I'll be reading to my children on Christmas Eve~? This is amazing!
N. Ockenfels chapter 1 . 12/31/2011
Hehehe, nice one. Especially Stormshadow with a turkey and Beachhead's oh so painful "Merry christmas" (Really big grin).
WritingFromTheHeart15 chapter 1 . 12/29/2011
Hahaha! OMG this was hilarious! Great job, it's hard to recreate The Night Before Christmas.. :)
ShadowRaptor8 chapter 1 . 12/29/2011
Is it just me, or are all of the characters used in this poem being given a hard time? Ah, well, it is funniest that way. P

Poor Beach Head. . . I'll bet it pains him to say the word 'Merry.'
88dragon06 chapter 1 . 12/29/2011
This was brilliant! I enjoyed very line of it! If I had to pick a fav it may have been Storm's part, but the whole thing itself was a blast to read. Congrats on the great work!
rogue-scholar07 chapter 1 . 12/29/2011
Ah, Christmas season isn't over 'til New Year's! Great little parody/poem! Poor Duke just can't catch a break...