I for one like this story a lot. I do hope you plan to write more soon. Maybe you could describe what Azhelia's wings look like and give a bit of a back story on them. I feel there are some things in this story that need either revising or clearing up later but I like it. I always like reading Link X OC romance/adventure stories regardless if they are not very well liked by others. Keep writing my friend. May the Triforce be with you. (wow that was like a full fledged letter, sorry if i bored you at all. Lol.)

heheh don't listen to the reviewer in your author's note! they don't know what there are talking about! I personally love this story and hope you update soon!

This fanfic sucks.

It's a pure romance, with a character with a random abilitythat nobody else can do, with no backstory. There's no logical explanation for why she has wings, she's picked on for no reason at all except to make you feel sorry for her. Her name is completely unfitting, unskyloftian, and special for no reason. Everyone but Groose completely loves her for no reason. She happens to have the needed skills whenever needed. And worse, it takes itself seriously with all of this.

It would be okay if everyone commented on how weird it was that she had wings. It would be okay if her being winged changed the story significally. It would be okay if the beginning of the story was her GETTING her wings. The story would be okay if Link was the one that got wings, but only in chapter 2 or so.

This is an original character fic, one where the story would be no different if the character wouldn't be there. I'm sorry I have to say this as blunt as it is, but this story sucks.

You could improve it, though! You already have pretty good description. Maybe give it some extra plot. Or, you could add justification for why she has wings, and give her some character besides someone to be with Link and fall in love for no reason. You might even turn the story into a humor story, it's just ridiculous to think of a girl with tings; state that!

But for now, this story sucks.

You write Fi's dialogue so intricately and beautifully :)

NO, DUMB VIRUSES! I NEED THIS STORY D:

Oh... My... Giddy-ah.
This is amazing! I love Skyward Sword! I'm just gonna make this bed time read from now on, looks great! PLEASE KEEP WRITING! :D

This is by far the best! Fan fiction I have read in a long, long, long, long time! You have an awesome writing ability! The only criticism I have for it is that it’s not done! so if you have some spare time please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, please, update soon! thank you

ok

Nice

I finally beat this game...and my heart broke ;_; poor impa...

Nice chapter btw. Keep up the good work!

I love it :)

Nice, liking the new person, mostly i hate those but this seems quite different :) UPDATE SOON!