Reviews for Peace Through Strength
entelejent chapter 4 . 11/27/2014
Really well done. Much more profound than most.
Otaku Prince chapter 4 . 9/11/2014
Power... I wish to see the Kyuubi wreaking havoc in Tristain... Yeah that would be nice so please make an update will you
ChronoMitsurugi chapter 3 . 7/23/2014
Got bored of Naruto not being Naruto. Seriously, he is supposed to defy all logic. This is just one exposition with dialogue to another exposition with dialogue.

Even the fight scene didn't have any action.

There is not even any comedy.

This fic isn't bad, I just can't find anything great about it. This so far seems more like filler chapters. Hopefully soon the plot will move along. Maybe Naruto with prank the whole damn school at least.
Rongis chapter 1 . 6/4/2014
Fuck you and your story idiot son of a bitch you fag
Quathis chapter 4 . 3/4/2013
Love the humor, and Naruto in his more ignorant days does allow room for growth without being over powered. Also good to see him get along with a princess from the get go, rather than after he saved her life and country. Looking forward to just what insanity you have planned. Until next time.
Undying Soul98 chapter 4 . 2/24/2013
LO! The dreaded tora has made an appearance!
BloodTrinity chapter 4 . 11/20/2012
Well...Crudcakes, seems like the elves are gearing up for war and Naruto still isn't recover aaannnndddd this fic is still not updated...WHY?! D:
Reishin Amara chapter 4 . 11/17/2012
I would like to point out,Naruto has two options he hasnt really considered... If he wishes for Kunai and Shuriken,he simply needs to find a blacksmith...and TRANSFORM into kunai or shuriken to give them a model...or atleast turn a shadow clone into heh,maybe even some other weapons if he memorized any,like the Fuma Demon Wind Shuriken or Ninja Wire.

Oh,and if he can get up enough clones,he could copy Kyuubis form like he did with just a BIG Combined Transformation.
Harlequin de Rustre chapter 4 . 7/26/2012
Going pretty well so far.

However, let's keep in mind a few things:

Transformation is a technique used for imitating the appearances of humans and animate living things; try to avoid stones, bushes, trees...and try to take into consideration the mass should stay the same (and, thusly, weight, inertia, density, etcetera should, too).

Naruto is a sarcastic asshole because he wasn't raised proper. Ergo, although he has a heart of gold, he's a major tool.

Kirche doesn't fall in love with Saito; it's a tactic to cheese off Louise and, well, entertain herself.

People have feelings and don't react the same way twice. It may fly in cartoons and comic books, but you're writing a story that doesn't have a visual medium to fall back on for such distracting things as fanservice and long, drawn-out flashback moments to make watchers forget the cavernous plotholes. Well, you could go the way of purple prose, but that'll just bore the shit out of the sane demographic of your reader base. Unless you want to alienate all but the readers who believe that Naruto is her husband/his fictional avatar, I suggest keeping away from description porn and weird scenarios.

So far, I'm sold on this story cos it doesn't suck like the rest of the stories involving this particular crossover. Don't disappoint me, man.
divad relffehs chapter 4 . 6/6/2012
This has been very entertaining. You have a good handle on Naruto's character. I hope that he would soon decide that he should dedicate himself to mastering everything that he already knows. I hope you continue it soon.
ForeverYoung97 chapter 4 . 6/3/2012
awesome chapter! i loved loved LOVED the play about Tora the 'demon-cat'! at first when you started the play i thought 'is this about the nine-tails?' but then i was wrong and after that it was just awesome! really outstanding job and please update!

with anticipatience

ForeverYoung97 chapter 3 . 6/3/2012
awesome chapter! this one was emotional and it was nice. really amazing job! to the next chapter! oh and please update!

with anticipatience

ForeverYoung97 chapter 2 . 6/3/2012
DUN DUN DUN! the sexy no jutsu strikes again! man that was funny! really great job on this chapter! now i need to know what happened because of the summoning so onto the next chapter!

with anticipatience

ForeverYoung97 chapter 1 . 6/3/2012
great chapter! it's originality is just amazing, usually Naruto is treated just like Saito but in this it portrays him being a sort of 'noble'. so just have to give you props for that! again great job and please update because i'm gonna read all the current chapters today! XD

with anticipatience

G3neSyS chapter 4 . 5/12/2012
1st thing i gotta tell u , dont let ureself down cuz of the flamers... its normal for them to appear .

Now for the story in general...You took a 13 Naruto when he was in his 1st trip with jiraya,his power lvl is the one he had back ,u balanced him greatly :) good job with it.

Now im quite intrigued what u are gonna do with the story... it has a lot of potential, u can make naruto discover and create his own techniques his own fighting style , maybe even find a way to make def(his sword) be more like a katana(nija sword).

About the fight with guice , the guy who commented on that was an idiot..clearly ... u even SAID that he was exausted he didnt have to much chakra and the fox didnt gave his own, so u created that fight just fine...

hope ull update soon
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