Reviews for Severus On Time
VKMP chapter 4 . 7/12
I love this. It made me smile and stay up later than I meant to.
KuKia chapter 4 . 6/14
I loved this story. It was nice to see Severus growing up with the marauders.
MyKala chapter 4 . 6/9
That ending is perfect! *_*
Guest chapter 4 . 5/9
I loved it. It's just great. Did Severus ever tell his friends about the other present ?
Jimbocous chapter 4 . 2/7
Nice one! Thanks, fun read!
Cassandra30 chapter 4 . 1/16
Awesome story! Although I will point out that no Black family member has ever been a redhead. They are dark haired with the occasional blonde. Why do I mention this? Because until recently Charlus Potter and Dorea Black Potter were James' parents. What the Potter men do have a taste for is intelligent women. Usually the most intelligent witch of the age. Lily and Dorea both meet this criteria. Again absolutely terrific story!
Cassandra30 chapter 3 . 1/16
Wonderful! Pity he couldn't save Regulus as well.
Cassandra30 chapter 2 . 1/16
Well done, Severus! Good changes.
Cassandra30 chapter 1 . 1/16
Excellent story idea! Terrific beginning!
daisycb chapter 4 . 11/29/2016
very nice, great change from all those stories where he's a nasty jerk
tricorvus chapter 4 . 5/17/2016
I'm crying because it's excellent
Rock on
tricorvus chapter 3 . 5/17/2016
Needs more cowbells- I mean commas, lol
Rock on
tricorvus chapter 2 . 5/17/2016
Just imagine the entire review box, filled with the word Excellent, over and over again. Rock on
tricorvus chapter 1 . 5/17/2016
I love it
It's genius
Rock on
ladysavay chapter 4 . 7/26/2015
This was really cute.
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